Man, this is chapter 2 the mc is 9 years old and he's already killing spirits like it's nothing. This feels rushed.
Asterion's shadow moved violently, revealing a gigantic dog's head with hundreds of red eyes. It appeared and swallowed the cursed spirit whole while it was still in mid-air.
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Or simply put it's about a character often theorized about in the game undertale who got shattered across time and space.
10- Gaster full complete soul. }
Ron’s Journey Through Remnant
Anime & Comics · m_42
I am sorry but 10 year old will never be handsome.
With a handsome appearance and a tall and straight figure, even wearing a lifeless prison uniform, he still couldn't hide his expression.
Harry Potter: It's just a billion points of dark magic
Movies · sabina_ali
I hate systems, and hate systems that give quests even more. It makes everything feel like a video game in the worst way.
^SYSTEM QUEST GIVEN,
World hopping as William Afton! (Fan Version)
Video Games · Soul_Afton
It's probably dead if it hasn't grown enough.
While I'm thinking Cetoddle has went back to prodding the egg before they woddle over and grab my leg and pull me over to the egg. Being dragged out of my thoughts I absent mindedly look at the egg and see a crack running down its side.
Pokemon The Mirage Of Illusions
Anime & Comics · Jaxadue_23
So far it's great. The powers are interesting the mc isn't an asshole or generic. The concept is an interesting idea. I hope it continues being great.
How could you leave a bad review on a fanfic you haven't read. The tagging issue has been fixed. Right now it just looks like you are being an asshole for no reason.
Why would you want to be ash's pokemon. Sure he's nice but he'd get annoying quick.
'Why do I feel like this? I want to follow her... No! I would never willingly be the Pokemon of a random girl! Though if it was Ash I might feel different but this girl... Maybe she is the Ash of this universe? I mean he's got this air around him and he cares so much about his Pokemon it might be fate.. OK! I've got to calm down something must be fucking with my mind I wouldn't even be a Pokemon for Ash! let alone this random girl but why does she have this aura? Wait it can't be a super powered cheat is she reincarated too?'
Pokemon The Mirage Of Illusions
Anime & Comics · Jaxadue_23
You mean narrator, because I am pretty sure the author is just looking at a screen.
You are 9 years old shut up.
Asterion glanced at the crowd of people coming and going. "Ignorance is a blessing for the weak," he muttered as he walked through the people, thinking that he would never be like them— weak.
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince