Ahmed_khaled - Profile

great story overall I really like the writing style but pls author don't kill off the MC's family for character development use any way other than that pls

it isn't that I don't like the novel it just feels like everything is written twice some good editing would make it top grade

I just have one problem with this story writing quality the idea for the story is amazing but reading the story is like torture to my eyes I really hope he improves the writing quality and stops saying every thing twice

In my opinion Mr author is fated to be treat as long as he continues Oh BTW the mha teaser is great pls make it Lol [img=recommend][img=recommend]

great novel over all and a very interesting concept the grammer is not bad only few mistakes are made but the only problem that I face that sometimes I find my self lost a new charchter is introduced and I am supposed to know him ? and the time skips aren't that clear but every thing else is ok

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