I feel each chapter pacing is great. It gives you a feel of time running out, that they need to make it quick because they will be attacked or restricted soon.
Is the pacing a bit too fast? I actually want to write about the One Piece world sooner, but I feel like I've omitted a lot of the process.
lets go to another world by uchiha clan
Anime & Comics · Ilham_Yamin
"Wēl metten! (Hello there!)"
A Song Of Ice And Fire: The King Of Winter
Book&Literature · EddyVirgil
Emma Frost
If black widow shouldn't be in the harem suggest me some charecters.
The Alpha in the MCU (old)
Movies · Kakarot1809
+1
Oscar?
1 definitely
If yes than comment here.
Purple_mayheM anthology
Anime & Comics · Purple_mayheM
Red Dragon Archfiend
Here is another chapter, hope you like it, i really like Duel academy, and im excited to write more, putting extra work on making the chapter long so it will be more fun reading, I think i know what deck i will pick for him but if you have a deck he should use, tell it in the comment bellow, Seya guys, i might put another chapter up.
Yu-Gi-Oh GX! Aim For The Pros!
Anime & Comics · Glace
white dino thunder ranger
This is your story take however long, you need to make it feel right to you. I think the pace you have now is great. The background and pacing work very well together.
lets go to another world by uchiha clan
Anime & Comics · Ilham_Yamin