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What if Torren Stark had a grandfather who had memories of his previous life with some power that was granted to him by the Akashic Records and he prepared the North to face the Targaryen forces?
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GREAT! IT IS GOOD, I CAN IMAGINE THE LIMITLESS POTENTIAL THIS FIC HAD! IT'LL BE GREAT IF ALL THE STARKS HAVE A PACK OF THEIR OWN LIKE IN BATTLE REALMS' PACK MASTER AT LEAST 5 TO 10 WOLF EACH, THEIR WOLF IS THE LEADER OF THE PACK THAT STAYS IN WINTERFELL AND THEIR PACK MEMBERS STAYS IN WOLFWOOD AND WILL COME WHEN CALLED BY THEIR PACK LEADER MAKE WOLF RIDER UNITS AS LIGHT CAVALRY AND WOLF RANGER UNITS THAT USES CROSSBOWS FOR TRACKING AND SCOUTING TAME OWLS, THEY PERFECTLY BLEND IN THE ENVIRONMENT OF THE NORTH FOR LETTERS. TAME THE SCAGCORN FOR HEAVY CAVALRY TAME ORCAS FOR SHIPS PULLERS TAME BEAR FOR THE MORMONTS JUST BECAUSE THEIR NICE PEOPLE HELP THE WILDING SETTLE OUT OF THE EVERWINTER, PLACE THEM IN SKAGOS INSTEAD AND BUILD A SPARTAN LIKE FORCE LOYAL ONLY TO THE STARKS TAME SOME MAMMOTH FOR MOBILE SIEGE WEAPON SUCH AS MOUNTED BALLISTA AND ALSO MOUNTED FORTRESS THAT HAVE ARCHERS INSIDE LIKE IN THE LORD OF THE RINGS LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST RECRUIT GIANTS! IN FICS I'VE READ THERE'S ONLY 1 GIANTS BUT A GROUP OF THEM! IMAGINE FIRING A VOLLEY OF GIANT ARROWS AGAINST DRAGONS! THEY'LL BEVER CONQUER THE NORTH! UNLIKE DORNE THAT FOCUS ON TRICK THEY'LL NEVER CONQUER NORTH BECAUSE OF THEIR MIGHT! ZEHAHAHAHHAHA just a suggestion author please don't drop this fic😂😁
The story has a lot of potential, but it's been held back by bad grammar and the MC's age. The age problem could be fixed in two ways, 1. make him older, 2. is to make it he's got accelerated age or something like that. WQ:3 SD:3 CD:3 US:4 WB:3
one of the greatest fanfic not only because the author listens to the suggestions but also discusses with them all I can say is give this fanfic a chance it's great and I am sure this fanfic will age like a fine wine in future
This fanfic has a very interesting premise it’s rare to find a asoiaf fanfic that’s it the past that’s also a great read
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💟💟💟💟💟 so far so good. Keep up your good work. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
great going please keep it up all the character pics are also good but the female characters pics seems to have some issues I have shared few pics for them in the review or response section of the images chapter, All the best
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this story of the north before the arrival of the dragons is nice one with the character build up of the MC is also very sound. So looking forward for more.
moreeeeeeer don't drop I'll support this novel with my free stones hahahahahaha
Отлично продолжай в том же духе !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice Story so far, quality is good, i like its concept. Can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded,This fanfic has a very interesting premise it’s rare to find a asoiaf fanfic that’s it the past that’s also a great read.
I like the overall story and where it's leading to. Loved the interaction between him and his family even though it's scarce. Could have shown, how Reagan and Lyanna fell in love each other instead of glazing over it. Give us some fight of Reagan, he had been training non stop but we haven't seen him fight properly.
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Historia bem interessante, abordando periodo antes d agrande conquista plot interessante mc é um pouco overpowered mas não deix a qualidade da escrita ser perdida
Yeaaahhhhhhhhh, finally a Mc that isn't a targaryen lap dog. Don't give up! Keep going keep going keep going Yeaaahhhhhhhhh, finally a Mc that isn't a targaryen lap dog. Don't give up! Keep going keep going keep going
please continue it an many stories with unique ideas like are abonded for some reason there are no winter king stories for some reason please continue this story 🙏 wish you the best of luck