The story is fun and intriguing The only issue I've found which is not a bother to me (but could be to others) is the grammatical errors or typos the author keeps making. Otherwise, good job.
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This is... Beautiful. The suspense, The quality and plot. Every part of this story speaks art. I wish I can be as gifted as the author. 5 stars for a marvelous book.
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Actually working on something like dat
ch 13 No Friendship In Business
Sci-fi · Arkbrave
🌚 Yup
Ryker looked on with horror as Jackal got pounded. He desperately tried to save himself...
Sci-fi · Arkbrave
Something like dat 🌚 .. .stay tuned
An example would be a Blue astral user using a hex. That hex would be relatively weaker than that of a Red astral user's hex. Of course, color schemes have ties as well. Purple astral users would have a better chance at using hexes than blue astral users."
Sci-fi · Arkbrave
You know the drill... Shameless review. 😁 So here we go. After months of preparations and learning, I am finally ready to kick start and finish a story, I won't stop till I see the end. I will guarantee 3-5 chapters per week or more depending on my free time. No harem. Mc and side characters will develop as the story progresses. What are you waiting for? READ READ READ!!! 🔥 🔥 🔥
NightShade
Fantasy · Arkbrave