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hope so and i am talking about the first part and definitely not the second part. if possible, make him lose his v card along with it as this never losing v card plot has also gone too long.

Author, i am truly tired waiting for something major to happen to mc. You have unnecessarily made losing his v card hard along with the other useless techniques of the mc requiring way too high resources and even all these techniques doesn't have much use now

Author, this novel is too good, story, characters, etc are all good but just one complaint that I have is that too much info dump of far future is given in every chapter

truthfully after all those power ups and hypes and if he truly missed this opportunity to that girl due to this lousy illusion then this is one nasty way to have him nerfed down

author don't make rely too heavily on his ancestors

The story pace is too slow and him not telling her that her boyfriend is cheating on her now makes it even more slow

Hey author, isn't this r*pe ? Truly disgusting 🤮 Drop!!!

hey author, put the real world conversation dialogues in a "double quote" and thinking in mind or talking with the system in 'single quote' whereas system notification and the AI saying something in a [Square Brackets] as this will make the novel more readable.