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One of the hidden gems of the "Alpha and Omega" world. I am ecstatic about how the author shows respect in the romance!

This review is of the first 50 chapters. I did not feel that the story was good enough to continue reading after that point. Great idea for a story I just felt that the progression and overall plot was lacking. Crafting of all items is done by the system and so are the available patterns. As such MC previous life as a weapons designer is wasted. Overall average at best.

All the possible positives of this story are completely ruined by the blatant recapping of previous chapters. At times as much as half the next chapter is simply cut from the previous chapter. I am over the 140 chapter mark and this trend is still continuing if I had not done a mass unlock at the beginning I would have long given up on this book as I am basically paying twice for half as much content. Such a disappointment.

So first the bad. for the love of God please fix your system interface spams. Seeing stats has a point and so do skills and specials but I do not need to see full details on everything Everytime you make a purchase or update a stat point. just show the relavent portion to the action. Also use current stat value ---> updated stat value. The good actually like the story and world which makes the above even more frustrating. Side note, MC used skills from Jura style why is that not listed on satus screen?

This the book that I most looked forward to being updated, hopefully they will start updating it again soon. I like the twists and turns that go on throughout the story.