It might had been mentioned before and I glossed over it, but why were his trucks hauling radioactive chemicals?
I think youre missing a few chapters
It feels like you're missing a lot chapters here
Its like the little robot from Flubber, I love it.
SPADE spun around him beeping, its robotic wing-like ears flapping in a joyful dance. The sight of the little robot brought a small, soft smile to Reggie's face, contrasting sharply with the current tension in the room. 'This little guy always knows how to lighten the mood,' Reggie mused.
TV · Vekay_Legend
Hope he carefully researched everyone and was very specific about who gets what. Given all he's experienced, it'd surprising he trusts there are any truly genuine places like this to donate money where it isn't just a front for something darker.
Before his death he already wrote a will that should he die, all of his assets would be used for the orphans, the impoverished and the sick children with no support of their own.
TV · Vekay_Legend
Lol this dude just soaked up a hail of bullets and still had the energy to hug someone and give out such a longwinded summary and request. Uncle Ben could have learned a thing to to from this guy. Reminds me of the start of Tropic Thunder where the MC is being blasted and keeps running in slow motion.
"Go to my room, there's a USB with multiple files of your families transaction, deals and the contract in order to kill your father to take over his company. My final wish is for you to sing me a lullaby, please that's my final wish, like you are putting a child to sleep."
TV · Vekay_Legend
Second version with slightly smaller font.
Loving the story so far. The tarot cards were a neat touch. I've added a title to your story cover, in case you're interested. Feel free to use it or ignore it at your leisure. If you could though I'd appreciate a thumbs up just so I know you read this if you decide not to use it. Cheers~
Loving the story, and great new cover! You're a very talented artist. To show my appreciation for your story, I added a title to the cover. In case you were interested. Though obviously you have the talent to do it yourself if you wanted a title, but maybe it'll be flattering someone liked your work enough to bother?
I won't lie, a someone who has no knowledge of Bleach, these last two chapters have been quite hard to follow.
DC: New Krypton (Omniverse)
Anime & Comics · Baph0met