There’s something missing after ‘because.’
Please, commas. They are a writer best friend. A tip: a way to know when to use commas, I don’t know how reliable it would be in your case, is to use the text to speech option most phones have.
Curing this type of amnesia requires not only time and extensive care but a subconscious acceptance of said trauma while not only requiring the consciousness of the brain to render the aforesaid trauma less traumatizing but also keeping the conscious mind tranquil. In other words, shit falls off the ceiling and hits the fan.
TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN
TV · Draul_TheOminous
Wrong choice of words from Starfire(author). He didn’t just fight in a gladiator’s arena, he was raised in one. Saying that he fought in a gladiator’s arena only tells people that he is strong, but saying that he was raised in one tells people much more.
"Beast Boy, he fought in a gladiatorial arena where one must die....the fact that he has not attacked us is a miracle." The Tamaranean warned, causing the male to slowly look to Kakumei.
DC's Saiyan
Anime & Comics · Necro_
This. I’ve been saying the same thing. This is at the core of the ‘No killing rule’ Batman, and a lot of other heroes, follow. They aren’t judge, jury and executioner. They are concerned citizens giving a helping hand. Charity, basically. But of the hero variety. All the hate that heores received for not ‘killing their enemies’ should’ve been directed towards the one’s who truly have the power to do just that. The corrupted justice system and government in the DC universe. I wouldn’t be surprised if there were individuals benefiting from the fear and damages supervillains caused every time they try to accomplish their great ambition.
Kal thinned his lips as he released Kakumei's arm. <True, but we don't believe that taking someone's life will change anything either>, Kal answered, <Killing him could make something worse come out seeking vengeance for his death. Then if you kill that next one you'd have to do it again and again. Would you really be willing to kill anyone just because you feel like that's right? Would that give you peace?>
DC's Saiyan
Anime & Comics · Necro_
I couldn’t understand a thing from what you wrote down. Please, try again.
A multiverse with ridiculously powerful beings that could literally erase me out of existence. At least, I know what's to come. I just have to stay close to the Z-Fighters and the plot and I can anticipate the future. My survival would be guaranteed while I train myself to the top.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
If he needs the teleportation power and be a human sponge at the same time, then yes, he can be both. His power gives him the best ability or superpower to achieve his survival. If he needs five or ten powers at the same time to survive 20 different dangerous things at the same time, then he’ll get them.
[Divine Protection of Animo]
DC: The Astrea
Anime & Comics · CryingJoker
I can only say that said jutsu saved the world at the end. That surprised attack against Kaguya vindicated the existence of the jutsu.
'Naruto, why would you make up something like that? There were less embarrassing ways to attract attention!'
I'm Uzumaki Naruto with the Op-Op Fruit!
Anime & Comics · NHyper
Agreed 100% I once tried to make cultivation novel where the mc didn’t cultivate at all. Instead, he grew his qi reserves and used it to create things like guns, power armor, an army of robots, among other things to beat those at a higher cultivation realm than him.
What they lacked, well beyond general human decency and a dose of humility, was ingenuity.
Ascending The Martial Peak
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
Goku was fatally injured by a measly laser gun in Resurection of F. And this was Goku was off the charts power wise already. Placing a bomb in Frieda’s food is the easiest way to kill him. As for a gun strong enough to kill Frieza, one just had to get the moving plot devices that are Bulma or Dragon balls 🐉 to create a gun strong enough to leve a mountain or a moon. The narcissistic Frieza would even stay still, in his weakest form, to prove the gun wouldn’t do a thing to him. One just has to aim for the head so that Frieza has no way of survival and transforming. And boom, Frieza is dead.
A multiverse with ridiculously powerful beings that could literally erase me out of existence. At least, I know what's to come. I just have to stay close to the Z-Fighters and the plot and I can anticipate the future. My survival would be guaranteed while I train myself to the top.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
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original Madara’s Adventure.
A young man named Madara by his parents, as they were fans of the Naruto series died. He always thought that Madara, the one from the story he read when he wanted to know the person he was named after, didn’t get real closure as he was just a pawn in someone else’s plans. So he was reborn as Madara. But the story doesn’t starts there. It begins after Madara is transported to a world of cultivators after the Fourth Great Ninja War.6 Chs 112 お気に入り
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Dual Cultivation: The New Monkey King.
Ethan, a book writer, was brought into a world of cultivation. He thought he would be different than the protagonists of Wuxia novel he despised so much. But he was proven otherwise as he walked the path of the typical ruthless cultivator who let the cultivation world mold them At the end of his life, by the hands of a cultivator he wronged in his ruthless path, he felt ashamed of himself. But that wasn't the end for him. The ancestor of his death clan reversed time to the day he regained his memories of his rebirth, making the future life he lived seemed like a bad dream. After realizing it wasn't a dream, Ethan swore he would walk the same path of his future past. This time he would uphold his views and change the cultivation world instead of it changing him. Not that the world will make it easy for him. Complete cover image: https://i.ytimg.com/vi/vGJabkY6U2U/maxresdefault.jpg4 Chs 82 お気に入り
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Harry Potter Fan Fiction
In a fight to decide the fate of our world, Henry Smallwood fought against his childhood friend, Max, the greatest fire mage that has ever lived, who has descended into madness after witnessing the horror that humans were capable of. Henry used all of his power to stop Max, killing them both. Now Henry has been reborn in the world of one of the stories he used to read wit Max when they were children. Henry noticed then that he has been reborn as none other than the main character of the story. Harry Potter, the boy who lived.3 Chs 112 お気に入り
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Dragon Ball, A True Coherent Fan-Fic
Author: So I was writing and erasing every time I had a chapter for my other story, I felt it had something missing. So I decided to practice by doing a Fan Fic after reading some of them. Some of them almost made puke of how much they made me cringe. Now I'll make it justice my doing one. I don't have to create too deep of lore. I can just work around what's already there and fix some things I hated in the original work. Vegito being retcon. Launch being lost in limbo. No love for Tien Shinhan. I'm writing here and in webnovel.com. Synopsis: I died and reincarnated in the Dragon Ball universe. This is how everything went down after I was reborn.10 Chs 231 お気に入り
Maybe I missed something in the previous paragraph, but I thought Vision only stated a fact. He has not asked for a thing yet.
"And tell me why you want that? Your processing power eclipses that of Jarvis and Ultron. We still don't know what that does but it's all addition at this point, right?"
The Vision
Movies · QuackVader