Kai walked out in the shirt Robin picked out with long sleeves and a pair of dark green pants. Kai looked over to Robin and nodded. "Those look good on you." He said before he looked in the mirror at himself. He muttered. "But this definitely does NOT look good on me. Yikes." Robin giggled. "You definitely look better in a suit." She said as she decided to keep the outfit. Kai agreed and went back into the change room.
One Piece: Guardian Angel
Anime & Comics · Smol_frog
"This is going to be grand."
HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
before que booms the places que should ay least check if there are prisioners or people working against there Will as he was. Just a thought. Nice FF by the way.[img=update]
He will be quite strong by then and have the desire to open up Wano's border, and that's when I will recruit him and Wano as a whole.
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
the power of painting Magic can go from emotions as miss goldenweek un one piece, the powers of SAI on Naruto, can add senjutsu or painting runes that do many things as in Harry Potter universe as some examples. just some ideas if you want. plz dont drop it nice start glhf
spartacus Blood and sand
nice job so far writing this ff. i like the frut the MC eat and not being op since the begining os nice. inverse more time on character developing and descriptions Will add to the inmersion of the reader ir soo i think. so far so good, dont mind the bad comments if they are not constructive but at the end its your ff and you should do what you want if they dont want to read they are free to stop reading. just enjoy writing. gl hf.
hope you don't drop it. great character building. very refreshing and original beginning. I've read 4 chapter's and its great. its dark at the beginning but it makes sense with the back story. hope you end it .... waiting for more.
The Clothes I had designed were a long trench coat that would reach my the middle to the upper part of my calves. They were pitch black with outlines of gold one inch think on inch away from the edges of the coat. The coat would split into 3 ends when reaching my belt area to give me more manoeuvrability within them. It had a hood that was optionally put there. The collars were long enough to reach the bottom of my ears and cover half of my hair at the same time. The collars can be folded to look a lot smaller and to also allow me to put the hood on. Inside all of this i wore a black shirt with golden outlines of the same designs as the trench coat and the same going for the pants (trousers) and shoes.
The Rise Of Calamity
Fantasy · GRE3D