One power I think you should limit is the chemical power that made the Boltons attack. I think you should make it that it can only influence an action not cause it. For example you can explain it as if some wanted to do something, it make than forget inhabiting and do it. It would make him less all powerful yes, but it would give more range to the story.
i don't think it's a bad wish. from what I got it's not just meeting people but people that could fall in love with her. Sure being important will have woman come at you, but it might be more Gold diggers than people that could love you for you.
"And lastly, I... I wish to meet many, many women who might fall for me."
Reborn as a Succubus: Time To Live My Best Life!
LGBT+ · Already_In_Use
Prejudice is often irrational and long last thing. Our world has many example of people continue to feed the hate generation after the other.
"A parselmouth," there are various hushed whispers from the staff members. Parselmouths did not have a stellar reputation among wizardkind. Even though there were those who did good, the infamous parselmouths were the most remembered such as Herpo, the Foul or Salazar Slytherin.
A Bend in Time
Book&Literature · EsliEsma
I hope you give Rowan credit for the Blood Fruit. So far all her accomplishment have been given to others. I would like for her to be at least known outside of Hogwarts. What better way to get more protection from say death eaters to have the backing and gratitude of the Vampires.
it'd more like kindred spirits found each other.
'Last time she looked at me like that, she blackmailed me for the Compound Ninjutsu method in exchange for her not telling anyone about me using the Telescope Technique.'
Naruto: The Strongest Senju
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
it's how you get a demon of the mist Zabuza.
While most go on to become either part of the main fighting force or the genin reserves, the only way they do that is if they passed what could only be called the first test of a shinobi: The First Kill.
Naruto: The Strongest Senju
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
Have you consider moving this story to patron or making it into a kindle book. I think it is good enough to do so.
One of the best Cultivator novel so far. It has not fallen into a lot of the trappings that most of the genre has. A the characters feel alive into the story.
I was hoping Freya was with her wolf wife Kelyn they were great together.
Malia: [what a protagonist halo and I wonder how everything will turn out now since Stefan is with Aunt Freya and Damon finally got Katerina to be with him, so Elena has no Salvatore brothers to fight over her, wait don't tell me]
Reborn in originals
TV · Adams2004
Like we all want to go. Quote from the Gecko brothers "here's to grow fat and dying in the arms of a beautiful woman"
Keeping his eyes on her chest, he said, "Why are you sorry? That would have been a glorious death."
A Song Of Ice And Fire: The King Of Winter
Book&Literature · EddyVirgil