Dailyarch

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I Exist

2019-08-01 入りました Global
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Dailyarch
Dailyarch
3 years ago
Posted

This book had some great potential, unfortunately it is let down by a terrible editing team (if there is one) which puts chapters in weird orders at the beginning and changes story beats around to fit weird contrivences that the author decided the he wanted to do, and they can't seem to keep people's genders correct line when they just reference someone taking and then describe their actions with a different pronoun literally 10 words later. The editing is a big let down but not as big of a letdown as the more recent chapters. Eventually the world opens up as things tend to do in cultivation novels the problem the author begins to change how all the world's are arranged and connected which is a huge problem because the majority of the earlier arcs entirely depend on how the universe was arranged and changing just makes everything else feel like it's from an entirely different novel. props to the translation team who manage to crank out 3 chs a day for a long time now.

Dailyarch
Dailyarch
4 years ago
Commented

mmm that's some good mutually assured destruction right there.