概要
After transmigrating through ten years and silently registering his name at the Shanmen for ten years, the system finally issued Ye Changge his first task: to take in some disciples!
Disciple One: A very ordinary mortal who carries an axe every day, cutting down trees, carrying water, and usually eats ordinary food.
A few years later, Disciple One left the mountain and destroyed the sky and earth as well as shattered the heavens with a slash of his axe...
Disciple Two: born evil and with the appearance of a young emperor, he once traveled through the Central Region and suppressed the younger generation, with no one being of match for him...
Disciple Three: the reincarnation of an empress.
In her previous life, she had fought in a bloody battle to the ends of the heavens and had seen "the other shore"...
In this lifetime within the Cangyun Secret Realm, Ye Changge's cultivation had reached a point where he has overcome all worldly thoughts and attained sainthood. "As a teacher, I won't be lax any longer. From today on, in the Eastern Region, I'll have the final say!"
Thousands of years later, his disciples left the Eastern Region one after another. They were so powerful that they shook the mountains and rivers. Ye Changge sat on the hill alone and played the piano as he sighed, "My disciples are insane!"
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Translator of this work heavily relies on MTL. The chapter orders are messed up. It's go back and forth. the same rank are also differently translated. I hope the translator do his work probably.
5 star because it's a Master-Disciples type of novel. Hopefully it would be translated and not just be here as a false hope.................
System novels are my guilty pleasures, especially those that have master and disciple progression models. Really looking forward to this hopefully it gets picked. 🌟
Chapter order is messed up Or the author has no idea on how to make a book One chapter the MC goes to some genius who's had his talent sealed to take him away, the next chapter the genius is taking the sect disciple admission test, the next chapter genius acknowledges MC as his master, the next chapter genius begs MC to make him his disciple. Either translator problem with chapter sequences or bad writing. MC has a sign in system with a disciple system Every special disciple he gets will give him a reward. MC reborn in a wuxia world as a direct disciple of a peak in a sect. Nothing else so far.
I dont know what is even happening in this novel. Its like the TLs are putting the original version and a plagerised version in the same book. There are chapters where they are litterally just doing the same things with about 2 paragraphs words worth of difference. Dunno whether author or TLs are just trying to pad the chapter count.
Again people spamming 5 🌟 rating even before this Novel released any chapter. Storyline is interesting but translation Quality is bad...... I hope this will be good and more chapter released. such a few chapters doesn't show us much.
Chapters are in badly need of proof reading How webnovel novels have degenerated .................awdqwqrhirheifshfsdifbsifhsofoiw;egfio;wheoifio;ahef;ioahef
Some chapter are like X happend then next chapter they do X again but change the place, how people meet etc. Like author had 2 ideas but forget about it. Nobody ever proof read it and its awful. some chapters are in the wrong order. That kind of poor work is becoming more and more popular on webnovel....... Its sad cause master/disciple are one 9f my fav stuff
Chapters are not in order, genders are not consistent, portion of chapters are pasted into others. Only those of the MTL DAO could enjoy this. It is to bad, because I liked the idea behind this story. But, I read for entertainment, not to solve literary complications. Maybe it gets better past C24. I won't know because there are plenty of other novels that put in the effort to satisfy their readers.
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IDEA AND STORY IS GOOD BUT TRANSLATION IS 🤮🤮. NEAR CHAPTER 9, 10, 11 YOU WILL BE CONFUSED WHERE STORY IS DEVELOPING 😁 SO BE PREPARED. I AM SUPPORTING STORY IN HOPE OF IMPROVEMENT.
Chapter messed up and repeating still by Chapter 20. Lots of dead brain cells from confusion and CULTIVATION REALM NEVER EXPLAINED. .........
It’s ridiculous how bad the translation is. I wanted to give it some time and read like 30 chapters, but it’s becoming more and more confusing and I give up. Chapters are mixed up, or rather there are different scenarios translated the author has used in his drafts, I assume. I have no idea how no1 even proof reads what is being released here. And they want money for this. No thanks. Dont waste time on this and confuse your mind.
at around chapter 230 the story gets completely ruined, the story suddenly changes and everything makes no sense anymore, there's so many missing plot points, things get mentioned that never hhappened, characters go missing like they never existed in the first place. characters that have been in the story since beginning suddenly change and are unrecognizable anymore. for example the first disciple was a mortal cultivator which doesn't have any realms and doesn't rely on physiques, but then all of a sudden the eldest disciple has this heaven defying physique and he's also apparently in Emperor realm. and then they talk about how all of his disciples are in Emperor realm, which doesn't make any sense because before the sudden change there was only 1 disciple in Emperor realm, and on top of that if other had reached that realm the Mc shouldn't have known because they've been in a completely different world the whole time and there was no indication that they ever went back to the main world, so it should be impossible for them to have ever seen the other disciples let alone know their realm. The whole story is all messed up and ruined, and I thought it would fix itself after a few chapters but no, I went through over 70 chapters after the mess up, and it's still not fixed and I doubt it will ever be. So I'm dropping this story, and I recommend you all to not even bother reading it because if you actually enjoy it and you reach halfway you will just be completely disappointed and drop it anyways. Don't waste your money reading it
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This is a terrible translation. I gave up on the story because of this. it regularly has chapters telling different versions of the same part of the story, immediately after each other. (for example version one the master is looking for a new disciple, sees a promising recruit, and the rest of the chapter tells of the recruitment. But the next chapter is version two so suddenly the would be disciple has come to the sect to apply for membership, and the master notices this promising disciple for the first time and the chapter ends with the recruitment, only for the next chapter to be version three of this scenario of the master recruiting the disciple.) I dragged myself through two loops like this, and I just can't go through it again. It's frustrating because I think the actual original story is really good so if the issues were fixed, or if a whole new translation was added to the site, I would definitely give it another shot.
The chapters are jumbled and the story changes abruptly and is hard to find the original and it also deviates from the original raws. The story is a Frankenstein of multiple good novels, for example "My senior brother is too steady". Its story and character development is extremely similar, but sadly where the other novel prospered this novel fails. If the author or the site decides to stop updating new chapters and put some effort into reworking the novel then it might still be salvageable.
----Cultivation Realms---- Body Tempering Realm Qi Storage Realm Pulse Realm Origin Liquid Realm Spirit Sea Realm Primordial Spirit Realm Refined Realm Rebirth Realm Tribulation Realm Saint Prying Realm Entry Saint Realm Breaking Realm Godly Spirit Realm Reincarnation Realm Sacred Heavenly Realm (Sage Heaven Realm) Nihility Realm Eternal Realm Be careful because the names of realms will change constantly. Like the Sacred Heavenly Realm will at times be called Sage Heaven Realm. Like this to keep it at the top of reviews!!!!
Can't give a very well constructed opinion because the editor (if there is any) is garbage and I abandoned the novel at 10th chapter. If there is in 1 chapter few paragraphs from the middle also at the end and then next chapters are put up in incorrect order and remains unchanged event when ppl point it out in comments. Sorry but I won't suffer through it. Liked the story until this point tho
Teacher : How old is your father ? Kid : He is 6 years old Teacher : What? How is that possible? Kid : He became my father only when I was born.. Logic!!