Dude your last few chapters have been repeats. The Chapter names are new but then your using the content from like 25 chapters ago.
I would say Originals or Teen wolf would not throw off the feeling of being in the same world.
2. Have another franchise in the novel, and if so, what would you choose? (Y/N/Comment)
Twilight: Rebirth
Movies · DumbedDown
+1
No it was perfect, it shows how good he is at manipulating people and the situation. The planning ahead and not only using brute force.
"It's a bit plain, but that's it."
Riser Phenex isn't a villain
Anime & Comics · akikan40
I love the choice thank you. Even when the premise of a story sounds amazing, if it is in 1st person it takes me right out of it and I end up not reading it. So thanks again!
I've been tinkering around with POV and the perspectives, and decided I would stick to 3rd person unless 1st person is necessary. Also, are you liking the story so far?
Dragon of Absolute Sovereignty (DXD)
Anime & Comics · Legaro
Taking down the woman instantly is fun at first, but you will get bored soon.
Riser Phenex isn't a villain
Anime & Comics · akikan40
Riser might not realize it, but because of his "Sex Mastery," almost all of his actions, temperaments, and talks, make Ravel unable to think of others other than her older brother.
Riser Phenex isn't a villain
Anime & Comics · akikan40
(A/N: Whose getting Final Fantasy 16? I'm not because my broke ass doesn't have a ps5. Put an F in the chat.)
Livestreaming? Yeah That's How I Level Up
Anime & Comics · SaiKojin
He also took any cash he had on him. He popped one into his mouth and lit it up with Dragon Fire. He took a long drag before he exhaled out his nose.
The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
Sounds a lot like REN GILL in my head...
"It's NFS"
Twilight: Blood calling
Movies · Magic_Author