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Veil of Thought

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作者: Acreogoth

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-In the Dark Ages of humanity, when Heaven and Hell first appeared, the world was completely in ruins. The angels and devils fought relentlessly over control 3 keys to unlock the truth behind a realm called False Reality. As the war progressed with humanity in the crossfire, legends appeared from across the world to defend humanity, they were known as the 12 Gods. They were the first ones to use the powers of divinity also known as Ascent. With the war won and the realms disappeared to their respective realities, it wasn't long until the world had to begin a new one. Peace proceeded across the world and every story that had been created continued to become reality... that was until his history was born.

Reawakening from the mysterious feeling of death, Kiryuu Amuka finds himself in a new world and body. He was reincarnated as the main character of the story he created, Xion Trinity, the adopted son of a baker family located in Blackband, a city south of the capital of the Luminous Country Capital City called Chanda. In the Electric Age Eon, technology has grown to use steam power and other technology such as machinery, canons, transportation, canons, airships, and ships, as well as, positions, Arcadius Keys, Apollo Artifacts, laws and authorities, curses, and more.

With the mystery comes more questions to ask about the world he truly created. Follow Xion as he finds himself entangled with the Lost Souls, lower gods, and Paradoxs, both physically, metaphysically, and transcendently - as he slowly awakens and develops newfound powers he was given by the Transcenders.

The Sovereign of Dawn spoke of the mysterious nature of the future worlds. As stories continue in an endless stream of lies and misfortunes, they also talk about magnificence and truth. The Seraphims spoke of a man who would eventually open the False reality, a man with potential that would be unrivaled by all who approached him. This is the Story and Legend of "Judgement." Or how the gods and Patriarchs call him "The False God."

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Stefano_Filippini

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_DreamWeaver

Got interested because I'm writing a story in a similar genre and thought to check this out.The story is quite complex and it's clear the author has put a lot of thought into it. grammar is good and most times you know what's happening so you don't get lost.my major irk would be the fact that some parts are basically mirroring events in LoTM. I can understand drawing inspiration since I do same but when events are basically the same, I'd have to say that it's not really good.All in all, good story with potential for greatness however I'd advise author to not overdo it with the inspiration aspect so it doesn't end up being blatant plagiarism.Anyway, that's all for now, bye ✨

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Acreogoth

Have any questions? Do ask away. Chapters will be posted randomly after the previous chapters so please make sure to keep track.

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Rot123456

only 3 chapters for now but the sypnosis was interesting so i am gonna read it don't drop it

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