Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?

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Louis_reader_00001

so its a good novel really good nice devlopment He IS a littel bit too arrogant For my taste and maybe He could schem a littel bit more and my bigest No IS the Harem Tag i am very sad about that i hope IT goes away in the Future 😁👍 sry For gramatic and yeah but all in all its a all its a good read

4mth 13

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raizell24

Interesting plot and characters although it resemble a lot of donghua works.Clear writing style and story flow albeit with a chinese touch, like mobs blabbering amidst the fight which supposed to be fast yet they talked a ton about how powerful this and that before the skill hit the target. And courting death ofc.Systeme had good reward but also a slave systeme that guide every mc step and if he didn't goes its way the failure is 'death'.What's the point of all those many god-tier reward if the systeme decide how you live, who you should love and who to submit to?.Lastly and the most irritating part is the usual pet mc. Who against 'males' even way higher-levels than him he pulled something out of his as* to defeat them acting like a chad.And against this called fiancée that the systeme forced him into? Without a single thought he submit and became a pet doing as she ordered.True she is strong but aren't the others before who he defeat were stronger? He didn't plan nor try to figure a way out...like usual she's beauty and he didn't mind being under her but above all others lol.3/5 for the chapters i enjoyed before meeting her and turning to 'yes ma'am' mc.

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2mth 12

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Abid_Azzaky

this novel is good the only downside is the powerscaling is very bad

4mth 9

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undesignated

It's good but it definitely could have been better. The MC seems to keep making dumb decisions whether it is stuff like forgetting to use a particular power or wasting fate points. though the main problem Is the plot inconsistencies, specifically the power scaling. At the point of the story where I am at, The MC is going toe to toe with early platinum level beast/prodigies yet just the killing intent of an inexperienced gold level character (which is a stage below platinum giving an immense gap) he( the mc) froze up, seemingly clouding his decision making 😮‍💨. Anyway there are plenty more chapters so maybe the author had fixed the problem but sadly I can't continue. Thank you and it was kinda entertaining.

2mth 4

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novelmeister

An interesting concept for a novel. The writing style keeps you entertained, craving for more. I recommend you read this.

4mth 4

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Lucky0_0

ntr ? yuri? I hope not. .. ..... . ..

4mth 3

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o_Infinite_o

Review after 125 chapter This story overall a good read. Story had really good start.. i was expecting a good quality mc and a stable story progress .. but after few chapter it was literally ruined.. There should be a limit how much plot armour help a MC.. MC makes too many dumb decisions, not cautious, troublemaker.. because of plot armour he is surviving which is annoying to watch everytime.. similar to those chinese young master's stories.. also power scaling at this point feels like meaningless... ;')

2mth 2

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BalsamicThunThighs

This has been bugging me more than it should have and I am sure I'm not the only one. Author if you don't look at comments, then I hope you take this one to heart and improve. Chapter 22 He's at 1850 Fate Points. He gains 4000 Points once he acquires the Queen Egg. 5850 Faint Points Total. Here's the weird part. He buys Order of Fire that is 600 FP Thats now 5250 FP. He then buys the Order of Fire Usage, Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell. He now has 1850 Faint Points left (says the chapter.) How is that possible? To give you an idea. Order of Thunder Usage is 2000 FPoints (Chapter 20 tells you so) Order Fusion Spell is 2000 FP (Chapter 19) We don't know how much Order of Fire Usage is but it's likely 2000 FP as well. Also when looking at the Status Screen it says he has the Order of Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell on Chapter 20. This is wrong. He only had 1900 FP during that Chapter and definitely didn't have FP over 1900 beforehand. I want to state This Isn't A Review on the novel. This is just me telling the author if you don't want people to drop your novel get the math right. Or better yet don't add in numbers if you keep getting it wrong. I do like your work don't get me wrong. It's just when you have minor errors like this, it adds up. I'll give a real review once I hit Chapter 100.

2mth 2

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Prithwy_rai

Overall worth trying but my biggest concern is the "HAREM" tag. Nvm please make mc fall for overpowering villainess only.....no fling or such ....both are so equally matched.

2mth 2

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BroMan987

Lots of people are being positive about this novel, but it is honestly extremely difficult to read, the mc is extremely arrogant with little to back it up, the author can't go two sentences without using a simile or metaphor. The whole thing feels almost impossible for a human to write. If you have nothing else to read then maybe give this novel a try but don't get your hopes up. I usually try and be give positive critism when I comment or review. This however I cannot think of anything you could change to fix this novel, good luck, I wish you all the best

24d 1

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MangaisLife1

Authorrrr this is a Masterpiece in its genre ! I am genuinely surprised. I was expecting this to not be good and avoiding it thinking it would be stupid. Honestly if you like a MC who faces challenges and becomes stronger and stronger then its genuinely enjoyable I also like the Fl and MC love My only problem is this should be only one wife no harem romance and there are too many others after MC but as long as FL becomes more beautiful (higher cultivation/bloodline does that), and is more talented then anyone else then there is no need for harem. Also there is no way she should accept harem. I also feel the whole Raina situation shouldnt have happened but other than that all good

20d

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not_real_1657

I am not going to say this is one of the “best books” I have read because it isn’t meant to be yet it still manages to be one of my favourites. It’s fast paced but doesn’t just skip through the very intricate parts needed for a story and the subplot of romance, In my opinion is done extremely well, something most writers fail to achieve. Through the dynamics and excellent writing the author achieved a great development throughout and an amazing story even with the more unconventional path the book follows. Definitely worth a read and a very unique way to take this.

28d

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Nux_Leander_2794

I mean to ask the author does the Mc rest as he is fighting and just that

1mth

LV 3

Ray_Bonavente_2245

one of the best novel so far that i read.

2mth

LV 2

Riabe

Interesting story... Love to read it... 👍

3mth

LV 3

SYED_AFAQ

author do you have discord ............

3mth

LV 1

Red_Skin_Duck

Overall a good read, and the story has a tight pace, but the powerscaling need to be refined a bit more. I'm also curious if the male and female protagonists will go their separate ways to level up. When will they be able to get married officially?

3mth

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DaoistD1ToKX

Dear Author thanks for this good novel . A little bit too overpowered Mc from the start, the first fight was really unrealistic. A well known prodigy who trains from ages and again some loser from an other world who effortlessly win against the hardworking genius. Really hard to digest it. Despite of that I like the novel. Good writing quality and characters. We need Madeline and the princess too in the harem. Keep up the good work. Thanks

4mth