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作者: Myth_7754

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Nyctophobia. Intense fear of the darkness or of the Night. It was unexplainable, unfortunately, Luke had no real reason or understanding of what caused this.

He was called the unluckiest man alive, but at the same time, he had the ability to conquer most of what was thrown at him. Bored of what this reality had to offer him, Luke was ecstatic to see what Gensis2076 would show him.

It was a VRMMORPG created by genius scientist Kenny Smith. It was a game like no other, it was more than realistic. Luke saw this as an opportunity to escape from his rather stagnant lifestyle.

Unfortunately for him, no matter where he went, along with his best friend, the only other thing that would follow him was his horrible luck.

He had the ability to face off against anything, but what could he do when he was partnered with the one thing he feared the most, the Night.







Current Release rate: 3 chapters a week

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Also, I'm not a professional author and don't consider myself anywhere close to one as well, as I continue to write I can assure you my quality will improve (^_^)

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

The cover picture is not owned by me, email me if you want it taken down (^-^)

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    Myth_7754

    Author here to let the new readers understand what to expect: 1)Basic info about the MC: With bad luck following him everywhere, he had no choice but to develop a rather carefree attitude, of course, this was also due to the trust in his skills. NO, this isn't a harem :/ :/ :/ 2)I'm definitely learning and getting better everyday. The style in the first 3-4 chapters may seem a bit all over the place. I would ask you to stick around and give it a try regardless. 3)The novel may seem fast-paced but that's only due to the world of Genesis being extremely vast. 4)Of course, since this is my first time doing this, it's natural I make mistakes but I go through the work multiple times before posting it so if there's still any mistake, it'll only be minor grammatical errors.(which isn't excusable but it's better than story-line errors) Thank you for reading and Bad luck FTW!

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    _N0thing

    After many fruitless searches for well-written, comedic, intense, thought-provoking ... novels on this website (which is quite the demand I know I know) I have come across this gem. It's wonderful. it has everything I could want and more. I won't go into the details, so please check it out for yourself!

    3yr
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    Tyler_Steed

    Honestly the story itself is good. However. This is the most considerate system/video game author I've met. If you don't know, coin costs are calculated by number of words, and wherever possible, uses various forms of punctuation in system menus etc. to minimize word count, and keep costs from inflating with frequent system prompts. And as for story, in a nutshell, he has insane luck. Whether the outcome is positive or negative, he always gets extremely unlikely outcomes. It's an interesting premise.

    3yr
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    DaoistRraWLH

    Amazing stuff, I cant wait for the author to finish this series. I hope it gets a manhwa adaptation. 10/10, would recommend. Absolutely one of the best VR MMO novels that I've read, the characters are funny, the story so far has been super interesting and it has a very lite vibe to it

    3yr
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    pallavi_nagalla

    Something intriguing...it's like as if a bubble is about to burst . Would like more information about Luke and his background. Why does he consider himself unlucky . Nate is cool

    3yr
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    Madz_Magic

    Luke/Night's character is pretty relatable. The way the story prolongs is at a good pace and as a novice writer, the concept and the arc of the story is very fascinating.

    3yr
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    Adhitya_Ravindran

    its mad good!!!!!! the mc is an athletic chad the story development is good and every chapter shows us more of the world. its pretty pog!!!! i would read this over hentai anyday

    3yr
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    Gaming_With_Vam

    The character design can improve. It's a bit too straight forward. I want to experience the character getting all strong and I want to know how said character has a particular skillset, how did he/she accomplish it. But I really enjoy this one. Not many novels have piqued my interest, whereas this one has.

    3yr
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    Vj_K
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    The way this novel is going , has developed a sense of interest in me . I certainly see scope for development but im quite taken aback by the meticulous approach of the author . You should check out this novel , no joke ! Im sure you'll fall in love with it . Im really impressed by the constant updates in the story . Its really not easy to be putting out 1-2 chapters a day . Check out this story or you'll miss out!! My favourite VRMMORPG Lightnovel EVER!

    3yr
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    sonicsplasher

    Pretty good, Although it's a repetitive plot there seems to be something new about it so keeps it interesting. 9/10 We'll have to see if there's gonna be any character development or plot thickens moments

    3yr
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    daoist_buttlover

    Its pretty good story wise, but the writing style and grammatical errors are just huge deal breakers for me. Good luck author, but poor writing is poor writing.

    2yr
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    Death_Penalty

    Ive read chapter 102 and i think something is wrong with luke, I wonder if perhaps he might actually be an even older primordial than nyx and Gaia maybe he might be the Chaos primordial As with all the hints author been giving i feel my guess might be correct

    3yr
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    Vijay_Kiran_4841

    I absolutely love this novel !!! Must read !! If you are into VRMMORPG , you'll love it!!! I appreciate the author's hardwork in putting out TWO CHAPTERS A DAY ! It just doesn't get boring, i donno how the heck he manages to make it more interesting ALL THE TIME. Btw, Valerian Milo my favourite no cappppp.Good job man,great novel .

    3yr
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    VA_Ias

    Pretty good start and I like it's pacing. Though the author feels the pacing is a bit disruptive. I've made it my daily schedule to read a couple of chapters and I'm happy with my resolution to read a bit online. In this day of a pandemic such novels help pass the time

    3yr
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    Vamo_kage

    Luke's character is very much the centre piece and one which I have grown fond of. The updates on the chapters are very fast and this makes my day more relaxing as I read through the chapters. Hoping this work continues and we get to a point where we wait eagerly for the next novel/chapter.

    3yr
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    pallavi_nagalla

    I liked Luke's character . Reminds us of a bit of all of us during this pandemic time. Helpless , down on luck ...but fighting it out using his wits ..

    3yr
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    Grant_L
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    Very well written and thought out concept. I thought it would be about a guy who got constantly cucked in life, but sometimes being cucked has advantages 🤣

    3yr
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    Angelo_k

    an amazing book author, I wanted to ask you something really but I found the review/comment section isn't the best of place to ask is there a way we can talk privately. sincerely your dear reader

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    WarrantyW

    Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Rolevee_Papyrus

    I absolutely love this story. The world they build is well thought out and interesting to read. The way they adapt gods and characters to fit in a video game world while still keeping their personalities from mythology is just really awesome.

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