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Unlimited Spells Works - A Harry Potter fic.

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作者: Fluffy_Grey

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Miles wakes up in the Harry Potter World. Wanting to stay away from the dangerous plot as far as possible he moves away but the thirst for knowing his origin brings him back to the very same place he didn't want to be a part of.

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KillerZane

It was a great fan fic too, to bad it got dropped because the trash of the human race couldn't help but harass the author about disgusting things. I mean how hard is it to understand that it is the author's fan fic, not yours so instead of attempting to defile this author's work you could just write your own but no you can't seem to understand this concept human trash.

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mountainwalker132

This is a great novel that was dropped because idiots kept pressuring him to make it a harem novel. Seriously people, just stop. I loved the quality of the story and the new relationships setup which took the new character into account.

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Swee2Pea

I love it! Hope to be able to read more of it later on. Thank you so much for not going down the harem route! It's just gross and makes no sense. I rather like that he's a massive flirt or playboy instead of having 20 wives that have no problem sharing one guy... I like this better I honestly don't care if he ends up with 1 person or ends up with no one at all in the end and just has a bunch of sex friends and is a man whore actually as long as the girls also maintain their freedom. The only thing is that I want to see more of him with his animagus form, the wolf as I thought that was really neat. Also more please of his cute hawk pet. Keep up the good work 👍

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Fluffy_Grey

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RoseAmber

I liked this story. But, just like most of the other Harry Potter fan fiction coming out at the same time as this one it is being dropped shortly after starting. The author should not start a story that they aren't going to finish. Don't worry about what is being posted in the comments. Just write what you see in your head.

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VIS_puri

Very good 👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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ferferfer2

If you're expecting a Fate series fanfic (like I was -_- ...), THIS AIN'T IT! Just a lil headsup for those that are thinking about trying this fic out...

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AshxTan
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Well I knew it was going to drop but ...oh well I still read it and along the way forgot what was written in reviews ... It was quit good ~ Well I don't get the obsession on harem novels ( or maybe I do because I am obsessed with system novels ) But I don't go around hoping every novel to be like that ~ People should stop forcing ideas on the novels ! ( Even though it sometimes helps Author ) But most the time they have their outline so making request as such can make them lose confidence ... Hope Author gives this book another Chance .... ( Still gonna keep it my library hope for possible update if any ...)

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MindTwister

I love the book and very sad to see it be dropped. I would totally read it on another site where the author had more control over the comments even if it was filled with ads because this book was/is a masterpiece. Author if you see this please do know that I am one of many people who enjoy your work and are not trying to direct your work in any way. I hope you continue this novel as it made my day. Other stuff: Writing Quality: I am not the smartest person but I give it 5/5 cuz I could read it almost perfectly and cuz I can't give a 4.9/5 lol Stability of updates: From what I can tell, when this book was being updated it was at a nice rate. I give it 4/5 and not 5/5 cuz its been dropped. Story Development: This book had one of the greatest things I have ever seen in the sorting of houses parts that made me so shock that I was hooked on the book. 5/5! Character Design: Many of the characters have already been made so 4/5. But the book does have some OC like the MC. World Background: Its the harry potter world, should I say more? 4/5. author if you have read to this point down here please even if it's just for the people who genuaily enjoy your book or for having pity on me, can you please upload one more chapter at least?

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Colossus_Eye

Loved the story, some in the community messed it up for the rest of us semi-decent humans if that is even possible. Tho the degenerate ****ed up in the head people had to go and argue and tell the author what to do with their story... we would still have an ongoing ff

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MoonTree

I really liked the story, I hope you continue sometime..............................................................................................................

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Maple
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I was completely immersed in your story. Your writing is insanely good. So I was quite shock with that brutal stop. Too bad. Know that I will really miss this story. I wasn't reading the coms so I had no idea how much it had degenerated but I want you to know that not ever once I have thought of this novel as a romance novel. I was just a great follower on the story side.

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Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

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uflesh940

Cool story :) Aaaditdtdiyditditdiydoyditditd8tdutditd8yfiyciycitd8tcoyf8tf9yf9yf9tf9yv7td8tc8yd8td8tf8tdurd7rd7td7rd6rd6rd7rd7rdurdriifjrjrjyifirirjtjtjifigirjrjfjdiriritififkrkrkjrjtjfjrjrjrjrjtjfjifrjjrjrjfjjfrjkrjtjtjtjfirkrjtjiddkjrjrjrifidorkrjtjfjkdkrjrjfjfjdjaaajrjjrjfjfjrkrjjtjfjdkrjrjtjfjfkdkrjtjjfifirkrjtjfjfkrjrjtjgjfkrkrijtjfjfjrjrirititjfjrjrik5jtjtjrrjj4jtjfjririthtjrjirirjtjt

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Mearslan

İt was honestly very good book but sadly no more coming ......... ............... ................ ................ .................... .......................

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DugwayKid

A great take on the potterverce. Just too bad the author read all the comments posted by scum. Story has been dropped which is sad as i was liking his OC and changes to the plot lines. I will keep this in my library and hope the author picks it back up. He holds a good vision and wonderful spin on the series. Truely hope author will pick this back up. I was loving it.

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LifelessMan

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Alisson_Calderon

I really like how creative and different this story is compared to all the other harry potter stories I have read so far. I haven't finished reading but im not disappointed so far. I hope you keep up the good reading and I cant wait to finish.

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Little_Herb

Pretty goo i once had "unlimited" bread sticks but most those places close early just like this novel derivative junk. But ye was goo read would rec.

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