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Walls of text with no paragraphs, bad grammar, missing punctuation, run-on sentences, and emotes like it’s a social media post. This book has everything.
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I think the text should be justified and paragraphs clear. the updating stability too...
emojis Break the immersion flow of novel is all over the place sentences are too descriptive and it is like reading an essay
nice story and also the background is nice