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Every chapter has a glossary of characters and terms. This is totally unnecessary. It also bloats the word count, increasing the price of the chapters once the author gets a contract. It’s a shameless money grab.

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This needs an editor. Zero paragraphs, making it hard to read. Plus missing punctuation and weird ellipses

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Huge formatting issues. Zero paragraphs. Second chapter has black colored font and is mostly unreadable

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If you like this genre, give the book a try

Give it a try if you like this genre……..