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Undead Nation

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作者: Zero2567

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17-year-old Ranveer Rathod's life changes when he looks at the television on the first day of the New Year and finds out that due to a pandemic 70% of the world's population has turned into the undead...
How will this teenager survive the end of the world!!???
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You might've read some stories like this but you must give this one a try too.

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    kidd17

    i like the unique tragedy that you put in your story but, I don't like the way you put the place name and date. in my opinion you should put that naturally like this : Unknown Place, New Delhi, India Saturday, August 27th, 2021 and you should have a little work on dialogues? It's better when you put them into sentences. But overall it's good. (it's my opinion)

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    JJ_Prakoso

    In my honesty, This novel should show more showings such as the environment, the situation, the reaction, and so on. So you can let the audience feel the atmosphere. As for the characters, they are all fine as of now and I hope there will have a good development. Another critic for the character in my opinion is I think you should express more of their emotion through either telling or showing a reaction when they see the zombies. Overall, that's all I have to say and thank you. Keep up the good work!!!

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    Madyan_wani

    my goodness such a unique tragic history is turned by author to a lavish writing. I believe the author is gonna make it a beautiful scenario. The bg,plot is kinda interesting ngl. Best of luck to author!! Hope this work gets the best recognition it deserves.[img=recommend]

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    Zero2567

    Hey guys it's the author I know it's been a long time since I have posted any update on both of my novels. Actually, I was busy with my exams. I apologize to all of my readers but I promise now you will be getting regular updates.

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    MrG3
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    This really does seem like an interesting story but I find it just difficult to read it when it looks like a script for a play. If not for that I would've given it 5 stars.

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    Moonyani

    This story is Really amazing! The Writing is unique But it would be better to put the dialogues in another way and the actions made by the characters. Mc is really strong and im glad. His living urge is good too. Keep it up👏🤛good job

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    Zero2567

    This rating by me may look as if I am too areogant but I am really confident about my story. Even though I am confident I won't you guys to leave an honest review on my story so please leave your review after reading my story.

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