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in a battle for pride a clan lost and their only heir lost but now that heir has become a girl named Emily
whose parents were missing for as long as she knew
how she became the heir she has no idea , but she begins to challenge the order of the world, fighting deities , monsters . she will destroy all.
How long before that power destroys her and everything around her
( this is my first book so please don't be upset if I make mistakes , comments and power stones are highly appreciated )
As I first started I was shaky but I feel I am getting better as I have started doing better so I suggest you should try and read till chapter 35
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The book isn't bad u ignore the errors but still improve it has potential put more effort in ur update speed it's to slow u used to be fast but now u snail pace
Well first of: Is this an actual fanfic, if so of what? Could've atleast put that in the synopsis so people would know. Second, the grammar sucks, some of the " are missing or misplaced, it doesn't read well at all. Best to spend some time going over the already written chapters and edit them.