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Well first of: Is this an actual fanfic, if so of what? Could've atleast put that in the synopsis so people would know. Second, the grammar sucks, some of the " are missing or misplaced, it doesn't read well at all. Best to spend some time going over the already written chapters and edit them.
The book isn't bad u ignore the errors but still improve it has potential put more effort in ur update speed it's to slow u used to be fast but now u snail pace
Well first of: Is this an actual fanfic, if so of what? Could've atleast put that in the synopsis so people would know. Second, the grammar sucks, some of the " are missing or misplaced, it doesn't read well at all. Best to spend some time going over the already written chapters and edit them.
The book isn't bad u ignore the errors but still improve it has potential put more effort in ur update speed it's to slow u used to be fast but now u snail pace