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Hey Author here this is my first time writing don't expect that this will be a great fanfic English is not my first language.
But i will try my best to make this a great fanfic.
I won't drop this fanfic and i'll try to update to 3 chapters a week (Change my mind i will upload 1 chapter a week with 8,000 words or more.)
This will be Harem Fanfic 'gotta catch em all' ill try to make all the heroine not useless like a certain pink haired girl. I'll build up they're relationship before adding them to the harem.
1st World: Danmachi
2nd World: Attack on Titan
3rd World: High School DxD
4th World: ?????
5th World: ?????
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Generally I criticize the story a little and point out some flaws here and there, but this one gave a new meaning to the expression plot hole, in less than a day he arrives in Orario and uses genjutsu to get in, I don't know why he finds information on the street. Astrea family and goes to floor 30 of the dungeon, not to mention the fight that is a dead narrative "I used a failed attack, I used a second attack it worked" end of the fight. I didn't even continue reading because wow, this story doesn't even have room for improvement, it doesn't have character development, relationships, the story itself, so author, I suggest you start rewriting this story and improve these flaws because instead of a story it seems like I'm reading a summary from wikipedia.
The story is interesting, but it doesn't make sense that MC doesn't get lost when he first enters the dungeon up to the 30th floor
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Shameless Author I'm giving myself a 5 Star because why not because i'm a shameless author. I'm new to writing so i might make a lot of mistake's so bear with me i'll try to improve my writing im open to any suggestion.