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Rick a Man in depression is Challenged by his daughter to become more powerful than her within a year on the Worlds first VRMMORPG.
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Awesome novel, recommended to read it, but you might end up popping a boner so be mindful of your surroundings 😉😂, the first chapters is just Rick getting over his depression and finding his kink... or more like it found him jajaja anyways i wont do spoilers, my favourite character is Iona by the way, shes just too cute 😌👌🏻
The story has a pretty good start. I can't say much as I only made a review after the first chapter. I just thought giving a high rating would motivate the author and gather more readers. It seems like it can turn into an interesting story so I say the author should continue with it
Pretty good so far, but there is only three chapters at the time of this review. Sooooooooooo, it might get a little outdated. Could get better could get worse, only time can tell.
Es muy bien la historia el desarrollo del personaje principal rick con su aceptación de su deseo sexual, sus personajes secundario como Verónica están bien expresados sus motivaciones en la trama y por último pero no menos importante la escenas de ***o están increíbles más de 1 ves lo relei Inglés It is very well the story the development of the main character rick with his acceptance of his sexual desire, his secondary characters like Veronica are well expressed their motivations in the plot and last but not least the *** scenes are amazing more than 1 see it reread
writing quality : 3 star. The rest got 4 to 5 stars. I hope for a better writing quality. Good story, continue your good job author ![img=recommend]
i would be an ork in this game and just enjoy it to the fullest jajaja, or an incubus sounds nice too 🤔, the book it really nice and has potential, cant wait for more. Iona best waifu.
Love this novel, amazing story and writing quality, character development is awsome, all that needs work is the update frequency.
Very good. It is engaging, heartwarming, and hot. I have more than once found my self too absorbed in the story to even __________. That’s not to say that I haven’t multiple times.
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Giving an average grade since the plot and character's feel like a replica of every genderbend fantasy novel. The meek fem mc and the aggressive love interests... I'm open to different smut novels but I've never been fond of beta mcs.
Its a interesting story.I like the interaction between mc and victoria so i sincerely hope that there is no ntr in the following update or else it would ruin everything
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It’s great pls dont drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I realy like this novel, and I fell like this should have more recognition, can't wait for him to accept himself even irl 😁 Please author don't drop this in the future!