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Transmigrated in the World of My Wife is a Beautiful Ceo
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MC will transmigrated as Yang Chen. My first fanfic so constructive criticism is welcome. This novel Isn't serious ,I'm just bored and doing this for fun. By the way the cover does not belong to me.
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It seems like a super cliche boring story but it's actually surprisingly interesting. This is what happens when a logical person ends up in these stories. Instead of all the dumbass **** the original MC did, this MC uses his background from the start and acts like an ACTUAL soldier king. I say give it a read.
How is this disgusting piece of **** so popular ? Extremely bland, Follows cannon + some stuff there and there. That's all. Extremely cringy, Realy really cringy. I can't believe this. He must have bought these people i can't believe
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hello author, are you not well or busy that why you do not continue to release a new chapter after 2 months. Every day I wait to read your chapters in this novel and not only me all who read this novel also agree with me. Are you do not have an idea or stress to create a new chapter every week.
Although it is an interesting story, it leaves much to be desired in writing quality. It feels like the story is a product of Google translate. Although the same style of writing is seen on author notes so it probably isn't Google translate. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone older than 18, would be too childish for most people.
This is actually really good. 5/5 for writing and story development since I like this more than the original. (What a shame to the original author) 4/5 for world background since this is a fanfic 5/5 for character design since MC has good head and do logical actions, not some ****ty typical you-know-what-MC I am not actually a fan of harem thing but this is good, unexpected for me Keep up the good work Author-san, don't tire yourself~
After reading you will probably think this is the original story. Way to good to be a fanfic if the author dsnt drop this it could easily be one of the few fan-fic surpassing the original.
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Usually i dont write reviews on this site , but for this i made an exception. To start of in the inital chapters the MC gets reincarnated and straight up goes doing whatever the fudge, character interaction is trash, almost **** logic. The theres character development , made me cringe soo hard ugh >.< after which **** logic applies to the whole universe , it was bad enough in the original but in the original there was some flow to the story, this just straight up next level bull****. World is not explored at all and other main leads in the story are just props. gg i hope u improve ur writing skill author. until then i would advice against reading this if you want a good quality fanfic gg
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Author you don't have to worry about such things, I am a avid reader of fanfics and I think you are one of the best writers I have seen as a fan I definitely can't wait for more chapters in this story and even the other story that you are talking about so please have a lot of confidence in you as I think you are even better than some of the real writers....
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Great fanfic specially when you read the original one. Well the harem is still there but not to the point that every chapter theres a new one. And the H-scenes are much less here compared to the original which in my opinion is good because the MC in the original was always fxcking. And I also love how Yang Chen here use his power in much more realistic way than the original one cause the original doesn't really use much of his power and always get annoyed by normal humans like you are a god just kill them already and be done with it.
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This fanfic is gooodd even if you guys havent red the original you would still love this. Honestly, this is much more relaxing than the original since the original was honestly a roller coaster of emotion. There, you would always find yourself stressed like there is always misunderstandings between the couples and the way the mc treat the other girls is bad in a way.
plz, don't drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ill be honest, this is WAY better then the original. Why? bcz 1. Mc is not a **** character who think with his lower half and still thinks he love his wife and is not doing anything wrong to her. 2.If Once MC gets together with his wife, he doesnt go and fk every girl he sees like from the original where he got his relationship on the right track then just to go other country to fk a girl. 3. and the MOST important part..MC is not a dick head who only knows how to have sex. He knows that this guy going to be prob. then kill him unlike original where he literally knows but still act like everything will work out. Anyway ill highly recommend this fanfic, specially to those who have read the original book. And i want more author plzzz dont stop writing,,
Surprisingly good fanfic. Author adressed and fixed most of my problems with original as well: 1) MC use his TRUE identity much more. No "working" in FML company, MC used his nigh-unlimited-resources - his influence, army and money - to start his own company. 2) MC doesn't try to lead "ordinary" life at all expenses. MC killed off 2 major antagonists before they started to make much troubles for him. He uses his identity as Hades from the start, which is fucking plus for me. 3) NO drunk sex with Lin Ruoxie and no obsession with her other soul, so there much more natural relationships. Fake Marriage is still here, but now it's not out of guilt and there isn't negative start for them both. MC doesn't try to "claim" her as his wife, she doesn't "hate" him at all. 4) MC is even more OP than original MC. - He got chear from ROB lul. Only downside - 20 chapters for now. I would love 1k more already. For now it has my seal of approval 100% 5) MC doesn't lust for every skirt he comes across, but doesn't goes fake gentlemen style as well. My bet is every girl that was in original would still be with him, but who knows. TL;DR: MC isn't as pathetic as original Yang Chen. - Summ of everything above. Every fucking problem I had with original novel was covered. MC know plot of novel, no surprises about this "chinese superb cultivators" ****, no "i wanna be ordinary even if it kills or hurts everyone around me and will lead to endless stream of young masters looking for troubles with me", no "SHE IS MY WOHMAN" **** as well. He doesn't dislike her and she isn't as bitchy as in original, but there is no unhealthy obsession for her from him.
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