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Looks like i got a system...
Its time to conquer Anime worlds!!
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I don't own anything here except my bad writing skills
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So I actually really like how you built up this story plot wise. Compared to a lot of fanfics this one is one of the better ones. Now first it’s being limited by the quality of writing. Although it’s not bad enough to stop it from standing out from other fanfics it does hinder this story from being great. Second your doing the same stuff that people hated from the original story where your time skipping almost everything that happens in aincrad but I guess this may be because your not trying to do a full 300+ chapter but still this is hindering your story. Third your character depth and development is incredibly shallow and of this wasn’t a fanfic this would be incredibly hard to read. Finally this is more of a tip than a flaw but I would like to see you add your own story in this fanfic and not make a carbon copy of the Original work. SAO especially the aincrad ark has so many gaps that you can fill without messing up the story. This fanfic lacks imagination which I believe is one of the most important qualities and author should have (even the system is kind of bland). Also although it doesn’t retract from the story the stats and leveling makes no sense whatsoever and I recommend cleaning that up a little bit. You also took away all the sword skills that normal sao players get and never explained why (horizontal, horizontal arc, horizontal square, etc) now that I think of it the MC also doesn’t have any actual sword skills whatsoever. Anyway like I said earlier this fanfic has potential and if you fix it up a little bit I could see it becoming one of the best OC fanfics (anime wise).
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an interesting novel the story so far is good, the mc reincarnate to the sao world with an op system and have a beautifull maid and a potential harem member too, hope the author will release more chapter in the future and improve his writing style (*⌒▽⌒*)(*ゝω・*)ノ(*ゝω・*)ノ
5 star for nice story u have there,, just dont drop it or atlas w/o notice , but ofc hope u can finish/cmplte this novel,,
Was going to read it but after learning the name of the MC "turtle" kinda lost interest in the story and why the FUCK &#^@* words in novel if it has a FUCKING harem tag If your not mature enough don't bother to write a fucking novel
Just skip. Like the first 43 chapters are ALL in SAO. story feels more like a failed Slice-of-life attempt. The System is basically non-existent for what it does. like, as of chapter 43, there were the same number of skills and stuff as chapter 5. The System is one of those where EVERY mission/quest has a death penalty for failure. As well as impossible/stupid randomly assigned quests. That have barely any progress, then in just like 2-3 chapters they are somehow completed. Story is called OP System. MC does not really feel OP. Just above average and worshipped for it.
Great Story but the plot has not much depth much of the storyline is covered VERY lightly. Would be a bit nicer if you include more fillers that could make us have a reaction to the story like the fillers in Sword Art Online.
First-chapter-drop, like why the FUCK is a USELESS maid girl in the harem, and why the FUCK is there a harem at all, like the inconsistencies are gay as ****, like is the mc that much of a horny bastard? After all sao still takes place on planet EARTH not a gay wuxia novel.
Every morning I wake up with a smile anticipating the new chapter. I pray to the gods and hope that it has been released. Only to be disappointed every time. Yet, I do not give up I repeat this proccess every day. And so will you. Just like the one after you. This is an amazing work of art, if not for the fatal flaw of the 'non updating' dieseas this would have made the world burn. But saddly it has stopped for around a month now don't know if it will update since the only thing auther sama messaged people was " not drop" and that is not a time saddly.
hey you evil author ..how dare you leave this fanfic in between!!! i curse you with truck-kun without isekai..... Muahahahahahhaha.....!!!...
I love the story an the characters. I would make the MC go to another world (Shingeki no Kyojin) after a believable romance level is formed (If possible I would make the MC take 1 of the love interest with him)
I love this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pls give more chp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very good novel I recommend to everyone to follow. Please don't drop it... at least finish it if possible.......................................................
Good job goos job good job i give u 5stars 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 i hope u not drop this and can update evryday 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
This 5 star is for Nanami...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good Novel I'm rating 5 star for writing quality because it's just minor such as missing letters(for me).
5 stars for the author not mindlessly giving himself 5 stars! Star Star? STAR!?!?? STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRERERERRRRRRRRRRRERRRREREERREEERR!(140)
good novel. continue your good work friend ..........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.................. good novel. continue your good work friend ..........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍..................
Well just leaving my mark here for the future generation....... So far the novel progress smoothly while not so much fighting scene i guess it still ok i think because its still in early stages of the novel. I guess the MC will make a harem and he isnt too OP even though he has the OP system. And cant remember if the system has the shop function as i didnt see him earning OP points or the like an the quest rewards he gets so far was lottery tickets but the lottery just give him measly stat points i mean wtf haha. I know stats points are important but his arsenal of skill is really too little and cant wait for him to get bloodlines though
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No one is reviewing so i shamelessly review myself Xd my writing quality i know its really bad so many wrong grammar or wrong spelling thats all thank you for the one who read this novel~~~~