/ Book&Literature / The Yuhao Chronicles
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Michael, the Air Chief Marshal of United Nations Military dies while on active duty and is given the chance to reincarnate into the world of Douluo Dalu 2.
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DISCLAIMER: I do not own the cover image, @momoco_haru does. I only own the extremely poor photoshopping effects that I added to it!
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So this story as far as I read is extremely boring. It can literally be summarised as: "MC gains power up or skill, time skip, MC gains another power up, time skip, rinse and repeat for 20+ chapters." And that is everything that has happened in this FF so far. He didnt fight anyone only has his spirits as friends other people are non existent. He literally jumps from good encounter to good encounter. And he was supposed to go into Shrek when he got Daydream but ofc not he just goes and collect everything that author can remember. Idk how aware author is but he only cultivated for few years how the **** can his body contain 5 100k rings is beyond me and his only ring lower than 100k is turtle which he upgraded to 40k after time skip. Like his body should explode from only that ring alone and not mentioning the others. Good idea but execution is poor. Grammar is very good. But character progression is non existent. Overall until author can fix these glaring issues I personally would not reccomend it. Another suggestion for author is to check master of Tang San from part one and his rules. You cant have 2 spirits summoned at same time. Tang San was only able to do it after he got to rank 90+ and as far as I know he is only exception. Not 100% sure on that tho.
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Finally found a good soul land 2 fanfic.🤐👹👹🧐👹🤖👹🤖👹😶😉😶😉🙂🤨😄😐😑😉😶😉😍😙😍😟😖😤😴😪😔🤐😏😝😔😟😟😧😟😖😩😖😟😓😴😲🤑😖🤑😓😤😤😠🤕🤕🤬🥵🥶😦🥶😦😬😠🤢🤕😠😉😍😗😍🤨😋🤔☺️😗😑🤐😣🤯🥵😳🥵😳🥵😤🙁😝😒😽👺👺🤡☻🤫💀👹💀🤖😺😽🧐🤫🥴🤫🥺🤥😸😽😿😽🙀😻🙀☠👿👻🤡💀👩🎓👩⚖👩⚖👩🎓👨⚕️👦🧓👴👵
Very good please DON’T DROP this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Pls don't drop, it's a great fanfic😊😊 ..... ...... Pls don't drop, it's a great fanfic😊😊 ....... ....... Pls don't drop, it's a great fanfic😊😊 .........
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One of the best fanfiction of douluo dalu.please release more chapters.please continue writing✍️✍️✍️✍️ and don't give up like others.finally, thank you for your hard work.🙂🙂👍👍👍
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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Knowing there is a problem is not a problem. Knowing there is a problem and not being proactive to resolve the problem, however, is a problem.
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Good Set up ... Pls make his steel space dragon strong to let him manipulate space Skillfully .... I like it very much .....don't drop the novel in midway !!!
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please dont drop this this one of the few good douluo dalu fanfic out there keep up the good work thank you for the vhapters here is your reward
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Ещё когда читал 2 часть БК, мне не нравилось, что на Юйхао всё возможности, буквально сами сыпались. Да, он тяжело работал, но он далеко не один такой. Здесь же это просто нереального масштаба достигла эта ситуация, причём и гг, который, как говорилось ранее, достаточно знал эту историю, резко по-глупому и скатился в детство. На мой взгляд тут весьма применима поговорка :" Начали за здравие, кончили за упокой".
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Just writing a story so gonna give it 5 stars. To some, this story will probably be like a Gary Stu fanfic. This is due to me not being a fan of fanfics that just create a bunch of powerful villains to fight the strong self-insert, reincarnated mc. Just writing it for my own enjoyment to flesh out the idea that was stuck in my head. If you have any ideas about my story, just want to discuss my reasonings behind decisions I/the mc made, or anything related to the Douluo Dalu universe, chuck it in the comments. I am always open for ideas to play around with on spreadsheets and documents to fully build and think out characters. Have a super day.