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Synopsis: The Undead Horde Of The Great Grass Sea
Born into a war-torn country, a boy’s earliest memories are a grim mosaic of violence, hunger, and despair. His mother, a battered and broken teenager, shielded him from hyenas, soldiers, and starvation at great personal cost, her screams and tears becoming the soundtrack of his childhood. For seven long years, he grappled with a bleak truth: survival often demanded cruelty, and humanity seemed devoid of hope.
By the time he was a teenager, the boy had become a seasoned hunter, scavenger, and child soldier. Among the corpses of fallen soldiers, he learned to wield weapons, scavenging not just for sustenance but for purpose. Over time, he built a grim kingdom of his own—leading a horde of dead-eyed children, sold to him in exchange for scraps of food.
The atrocities he committed—the razed villages, the military outposts he obliterated, the screams of the innocent—haunted him less than the knowledge that his actions were part of a cycle of survival. But in the depths of his despair, amidst the chaos of war, an unlikely glimmer of humanity emerged: a book.
A dying soldier, whose face had been melted by white phosphorus, handed him a copy of A Game of Thrones and a pilgrim began to teach him how to read. For the first time, the boy found something that transcended the horrors of his existence. Yet, as he burned alive during an airstrike, his final regret was not the lives he had taken or the pain he had endured, but that he would never finish the book.
In this harrowing tale of survival and loss, The Undead Horde Of The Great Grass Sea explores the resilience of the human spirit and the fragile threads of hope that can emerge even in the darkest of places.
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レビューを書くThe story is good so far but slow the story down or write some chapters (one before the wake up chapter for details on the MC and why he is how he is) and put one before the Wake up chapter then put some after to really explain how his horde grew and the struggles hes had controlling it (some of the dothraki probably tried to challenge him for the khal position) But if you dont want to do that try to mix it up a little really build up the characters and the world maybe do a little bit of kingdom building drop some flash backs of the MC and the travels hes done with the horde and then with how the story progresses show how he interacts with different people and how he thinks maybe switch the POV later down the line when the story has more chaps so the readers dont get bored but really great story so far ALSO A FEW BOOKS I RECOMMEND YOU LOOK AT ARE "The Burnt Prince-GOT SI" "Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)" "GOT: The Golden Lion" I feel like they might be a books that can give you ideas on how to improve and make your story go smooth
作者 FeatheredPen
Really enjoyable I personally haven't seen a Thrones fic with this premise before and I like it the mc is fun to read with his calm yet ruthless personality Plus who doesn't like good lemon's In there stories.