/ Fantasy / The Ultimate Transmigration {Completed}
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Before you read this fanfic, Ill just say this is a wish-fulfilment kind of fanfic. It’s absolute garbage, so if you don’t like it, just leave. I dont have time for hate comments or reviews.
Ren is an average teen that died from drowning in water when the bus driver fell asleep and drove towards the water. He wakes up in a white, plain room with a table and 2 chairs. He finds god and gets to get 2 wishes from the positive karma he got from donating to the poor, helping the homeless and helping the sick. Watch Ren travel to all sorts of different anime and novels.
Anything I use in my story is not mine besides my character. Also, the cover is not mine. Heavily inspired from against the gods with an anime system, Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System, a Saiyan from the multiverse, and a few others. I recommend to check them out.
Warning - If you don’t like the M.C being op, I recommend you drop this novel. You have been warned.
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Why does your title look like Killua is flossing? Plus it's Rinnegan not Rennegan.
Well its good,not too shabby but good Just kidding,Its awesome I hope that it doesn't get dropped There are a lot of good books that get dropped these days PLS DON'T DROP IT
First, the quality of writing is 2 stars because there are many voids in the story and you could make it mysterious in order to avoid some common flaws, for example, when he died, the system responsible for his desires that could be implemented against karma died, if the strength was strong, he could put defects to make it cheaper, and so on. Because she can leave her at any moment, it is an unstable situation. The development of the story is one star because you made him Obi from the beginning, and this will affect the story greatly, meaning that I am the next chapters will never be good. As for the background of the world evaluated by 1 star, it is possible for the writer to improve the background until the person’s death method did not explain it well, and why a higher creature will waste time to meet a human being. This is a big and very common mistake, please change it if you can. Character design I do not know very well in order to establish an accurate evaluation 2 stars, according to the oldest, it may rise or fall more. You have a Google translator.
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I really cant read this unrealistic **** any further 1 and a half year old kids are walking and talking like some normal adults right. I recomend not to read this if you dont want to lose your braincells. My opinion well your free to give it a shot.
This story is a mess. 1/3 of the story is the MC reviewing his stats. 1/3 of the story is the MC training on his own and talking to his system. 1/3 of the story is actual plot. The grammar is not great but the writing style of the author can get annoying. Sometimes its written in the style of a script sometimes its proper English. Every time a “wish” comes up, please pay no attention to the amount of wishes. 1 wish can easily turn into 3 on a whim with random extras thrown in. Time skips. They are pretty random. Some time skips are for power ups, some are to skip until interesting plot points and some I feel is just because the author loses interest at the current plot point and skips the events. The OP MC is somehow no OP. Even after getting tons of god like powers for other universes, his in system ranking system doesn’t put him at the top. The MC has beyond Super Saiyan Blue form which would put anyone at the top of 99% of the universes out there but for some reason he’s not and there’s no explanation. The system, oh god the system. It seems to change every few chapters. The author could get away with this if there was some kind of unlocking function but there’s not. Different functions just gets added in at random times like the ability to merge skills/bloodlines/powers and a skill point system after 20 chapters while the MC was rearranging his stats screen. As a summary, if you are still interested then go ahead and read this story. Note: review at chapter 58
I tried reading but I'm sorry I just quit for a while I came back to see more development but it just got worse it started and but somehow degraded by chapter this is my personal opinion it has so many plot holes and parts that make no sense I'm sorry if this hurts you but it's the honest truth I hope your writing style can improve I'm sorry but I can't be bothered to care for or read this anymore now good day
Novel idea is good but poorly executed. Common!!!! A child under 2 year old doing assassination job?? Be realistic to the anime norm here!! Also the status contradictory is too much!! Fighting Hisoka and barely winning but his leader board and status is way stronger?! Then saying he is 12 years old and next few paragraphs having status showing that he is 6.5 years old? And then after waking up from fight with Hisoka at the hunter exam status and leaderboard shows he’s even stronger than Netero?? Like wtf??? Too much inconsistent here. Author needs to review and rewrite.
Boring tbh. MC only talks to his system. Even when he talks someon else it's only one or two random sentences. He's impulsive and childish. He throws a tantrum like a 2 year old kid after his system lies to him. Other than that he's made the highest level power there is, and next second some random nobody is stronger than him. The only fix for anything would've been a love interest because he's alone and has no idea how to interact with people. A good example of Multicrosses are ones where MC has people to interact with. Not very good, MC has no character is childis, impulsive and stupid, however at least the grammar is ok. Btw this is why the MC has AT LEAST friends. So the story isn't MC speaking to System and new powers which are called "DESTROY EXISTENCE, NOTHING CAN STOP YOU AND YOU ARE THE STRONGEST", when 1 chapter later some random cannonfodder is introduced as even more powerful. Also for some reason the author seems like he's 12 and Emo judging by how MC is (No-one understands me, someone lied to me once for my own good cause I'm impulsive and childish and I hate them waaaaaah where is my candy mama type MC bs).
Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck. Boring as fck.
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It is interestin in the beginning but gets boring over time.................................................................................
It lis literally Mc getting superpower every chapter there is no plot or story.There are some interaction betn the character but majority is him talking to system and getting new powers every single chapter. And you know what he doesn't even use quarter the powers.
Is gud I hope you don't drop this because so far it's been fun to read....,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,..,,.,.,,.,..,,..,.,,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Overall pretty good novel so far so good. Grammar better from most of the novels here also if you are a fan of the books author mentioned in the discription you will like this
It's a abomination reader are advise to take extreme precautions while reading it. It is very harmful for your brain so, please read at your own risk.
The development of events is too fast and idiotic, it is impossible to write dumber, the main character develops very quickly, although for some reason he still loses to weak characters, or has difficulties with things that he could easily do with his own strength, there are almost no dialogues, and if there are they are poorly written, the battle in ranobe is written just as disgusting, I do not recommend reading, a waste of time, quickly get bored.
it is almost the same as Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System Here the name is Ren and at the other one SoRen..... .... .... ....😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑