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The Strongest Legend of Dragon Ball (Maple Leaf Connection, 枫叶缀)
4.05 (38 レビュー結果)
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Xiaya reincarnated in the Dragon Ball Universe as a Saiyan 12 years before the destruction of Planet Vegeta.
Watch him as he creates the strongest legend of Dragon Ball World from the beginning.
SPECIAL NOTE
This is not my story, I saw even though it was already on this platform, but it stopped posting on 20+ something chapters, so I decided to spread it on this platform.
The author of this story from my knowledge is:
Maple Leaf Connection
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Excellent work. Although it is filled with Chinese Names and other matters, The story is great and Entertaining to read. In my personal opinion it's a great story with greater potential. Keep up the Excellent Work.
Just by reading 3 chaps I can tell why you didn't edit it before posting , I mean I am literally having a headache rightnow just by reading .. I don't know If you had tried to edit it I can't really imagine the pain you would have felt..
I haven't read past the first 20 chapters, But what I see so far is just total butchering of the character names, caveman talk and sentences that make no sense also random chinese characters. Just how irresponsible and lazy do you have to be!?
Everything is trash. This FanFiction was good at the first 15 chapters but right after that the fanfic took a real turn. Matter of fact this cant even be called a fanfic after that point. This fanfic turned into a Cultivation novel. Everyone in the entire story acts like those people from Xianxia and Xianxua novels. The MC is like a typical chinese novel mc and the main girl act like those cold beauty senior sister.
MC is a Saiyan, but not only he, but the female support character don't hold Saiyan names, instead they are Chinese, and stupid to pronounce in English. I didn't get very far before the fic began to feel repetitive to other fics I've read about Dragon Ball. I.E. Trains on Vegeta for a few years, gets sent to a planet higher than expected, beats planet, goes to earth, trains, goes BACK to the death trap that is planet Vegeta, blah blah blah. You get the idea. So I'm dropping here
Yeah its garbage. This is not a Dragon Ball fanfic it's a cultivation novel down to last trope. Don't waste brain cells and time here. 👎👎👎
Why didn't you make him OP ***HHHYYYYY did you do this to me? Tell me why did you have to do this give me one good reason. ______________________________________________________________________________
Statistically, this book would be good I cannot lie its a nice story very well translated, I like how to book moves forward but if I where to give a real personal review on how it is so far...id say a 3 star rating. The female main character is annoying and seems so forced how she behaves around the MC. If she died the story wouldn't be affected and id quite like to see it happen. The author decides to change it to a cultivation web novel and changes ki to qi, training to cultivation like why? its a fucking dragon ball fan fictions ffs. uses BS wuxia knowledge honestly a real disappointment. I enjoy the story but these things are very annoying
Reasoning makes no sense. Like how is the highest power lvl 1000 and your great ape form is over 9000 and you still can't wipeout the world population. Then there is instant transmission that does not work like the original instant transmission but instead is space worping. So yeah could of been better but with this nonsense I stopped reading it at chapter 12.
the story starts out good but start too bog you down after chapter 30 and you will come to hate the word expert my advice find someone to edit it for you.
the novel is good, but it's already being translated by someone. they've covered 509 chapters so far; they also have a patron up if you want to read more. I also see people complaining about the writing, but tbh, I didnt read this version and the version I did read wasn't that bad, so I'm not sure where they got this from.
after long time i wanted to reread this story because half of what i read was MTL... now after just a few first chapters i remembered the only flaw that i always see in Chinese fanfics... all OC has distinct Chinese names that are contrasting with original naming convention... But i guess here it can slightly hide behind Son Goku and his sons... ButMK2 you have to admit that Xiaya and Xiling is weird name for a Saiyan... --- Kakarot, Vegeta, Bradock...
This story is one of the best I've ever read... it has a lot of character building and is realistic(in the world building aspect), please post more, and not to long ago I think I saw someone trying to copyright this great story, I hope they get what they deserve!
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I know this is just a translated fanfic, but I will review it anyways. This is just a cultivation novel in the form of a dragon ball fanfic. The description got my hopes up, but ultimately I was dissapointed. A random saiyan girl somehow gets just as strong as the MC somehow, and the girl just follows him aroung which feels forced. I strongly dislike hoe at first the MC didnt like her and boom after a couple months he likes her. She is probably going to be the love interest which is stupid, and a lot of things and events are forced. Im just disspointed. I gave 2 stars for the writing because the translation was ok.