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Follow Lucas Grindelwald, a reincarnated soul who walks a similar path to his adopted father, the infamous Dark Lord Gellert Grindelwald.
As a good Dark Lord in training, expect a MC with loose morals who has no problem with getting his hands dirty.
This is a translation of the fanfic Hogwarts: I, The Strongest Dark Lord Of History.
The story will have differences from the mtl version since I will be changing things I don't like or that don't make sense.
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This is a pretty good translation. And the MC is interesting. Everyone knows his nature but he is still operating in plain sight. I loved that! usually the MC hides and plans and so on... it's gotten boring. Kudos on this wonderful editing and i hope to see this continued.
Disappointing, I expected more. Why do most HP fanfics, where the MC is clearly supposed to be a villain, not act like a villain but like an anti-hero? The author repeatedly tries to compare him with the two dark wizards and give an image that Lucas is better, more cruel, colder and more intelligent than Voldemort and Grindelwald, but in my opinion he is nothing more than a clown who is looking for a stage to appear on. . After all, both Grindelwald and Voldemort don't know that their world is fictional and neither has a system that rewards them for any reason, but Lucas does and he's not in a totally different league than the two. They talk so much about his genius, but it is only seen off-screen, because at no point did I read about the MC acting in a genius way, he just steals Harry's opportunities and acts like a casanova dandi. The author changed Hermione's personality, she became a vase and doesn't seem intelligent or charismatic at all, she acts like a mini fan just like all the other girls at Hogwarts, the author doesn't even try to be subtle that they will become Harry's harem. MC. I also don't understand this Chinese obsession with elven lineage, as long as it's a fantasy setting they will insert this trope. What bothered me the most was that even though the MC swore he was a villain, we didn't see his evil things being done first hand, you could say he killed his enemies but in a witch war scenario who wouldn't?
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So far everything is very good, the MC is interesting, the system doesn't influence him, which in my point of view is great. That's it for now, I'll wait for more updates, I just hope that the Translator doesn't abandon this work midway.
im pretty sure i read the mtl of this a while ago, it is pretty good from what i remember. pls continue translating this for people who dislike mtl(havent checked the quality,hope its good)
Eh, it was great for awhile, and you could see effort at first, but then the story became lazy Chinese Manhua trash. Where the MC keeps putting people in their place while catching underage harem members like they're Pokemon. A shame really.
A great story, with a decently well written MC but it has one flaw, it really has a Harem of 12-13 year olds. I do find that disturbing in so many levels, I'm just glad it hasn't escalated beyond kisses on the cheek. But I really can't with a REINCARNATOR having a harem of little girls. The author could have atleast waited till they were further along near the end of the books to escalate into this. (I know this is translated). It does spoil the story a bit, but if you look past that this whole arc is pretty well made. If you're like me and read basically all the HP fanfics possible. This one sits in the middle because of what is stated above, if not it would be in the top cut.
Translator doesn't change all the cringe lines by MC when talking to any female character but changes actual interaction. A kiss on the lips gets changed to a light brush of a kiss to the cheek. Why? What the f is this? Changing such a minor thing but leaving all the cringe unchanged. dropped trash. Also MC seems to focus on gacha the whole time, havent seen him train ONCE.
The TL and updates are quite good, but the story is just meh. Nothing about it that makes me want to keep reading, zero conflict, hence zero plot.
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The fanfic is really good, but just like any story with systems, the MC was too confident in his ability and took everything for granted... and it was harem. Although adding harem on a story that's not focused on romance is pretty good, but for the MC who seems to have a goal to revolutionize the wizarding world, it just doesn't fit the theme. Moreover, as he was a transmigrator, his mind is far more mature, yet he was taking (romantic) interest to 11-years-old childs just because they're "pretty". This is clearly a pedo mentality and seem to have taken interest in "growing" them. If the romantic interest was introduced later on the story when the girls were already matured, it's okay, but for an 11-years-old child... that's just 😩🤢🤮 Not to mention, Hermione who was only 12-years-old was already speaking about accepting other girls as the MC's future harem saying, she alone cannot contain the "greatness" of the MC. This is really a big turn off.
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Very interesting fic where a Dark Lord that makes some sense is being built, which grows along with his talent and his own system. I like that the MC isn't completely evil, like most of those dumb MCs who only know how to kill and be dumb, there's a good balance here and I think it's more Gray. I also think he is building more relationships with other characters well. Overall an excellent fic, I highly recommend it.[img=recommend][img=update][img=gift][img=More pls]
I have managed to read till chapter 165 before I lost interest. The plot itself is shallow with no real depth to it. All the characters seemingly kiss the ground the MC walks under, including Dumbledore himself, for no good reason. The author follows the books plot all the time even though the MC has no risen to do it. Till chapter 165 I have gradually found myself losing interest till I eventually dropped it. Though the system in this fanfic was nice and the prizes the MC gets were also good, the grammar itself was also excellent with nearly no mistakes.
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This is what we call a great story with peak-level translation. The dialogues are soo good that you can't even know its a translation the only cringy part is when the girls call him honey, I think that's good too it's just my Alexa sounds like a sl-ut-prounouncing that. Can you release two chapters a day just for this Goblet of Fire arc? Please
![Cliffhanger Extravaganza]! 97% cliffhangers I started reading this when there was only ~30 chapters and it has been cliffhanger after cliffhanger. The writing is good but every chapter feels like "NEXT TIME on Dragon Ball Z" it's to the point where I can't even read it anymore. I hate feeling disappointment after reading; it ruins my mood. (If this review is removed I will post again and again. saved it on Google docs and i will put a counter on how many times I have to repost it)
The story was good, it's a shame it's a pathetic harem between 12 and 13 year olds. It doesn't make any sense. ................................