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It all started when I fell into the marvel cinematic universe...literally and by literally you know what I mean..I saw the Infinity stones and before I knew it I was there..so I made plans like any other hero would..well hero because I have something which others dream of:The gamer ability..and I will make full use of it to live my life awesomely..and do help protect the world..
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Esta es un buen fanfiction ya que nos presenta un gamer no enfocado en entrenamiento sino en mejorar una base segura ya que tuvo un mal inicio pero la historia se desarrolla de manera natural sin parecer forzada, el elenco de la historia se nos presenta de una manera Real y no 2d como normalmente se ve una enfoque en lo que creen o leyeron de ellos nos dan de forma clara y sin prejuicios como es el verdadero personaje sin afectar su criterio. Buena historia con buen personaje es como lo resumo.
I don't know about others but I'm loving this story as of now...hope you will not drop it ..
Isn’t this the same novel from fanfiction are you updating this or is it 8chapters only plz update this is something great and good ....................................................................……………,.........
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its a great fanfic even though its long before the chapter updated i truly it will continue again............................................
I would have liked to see more of this :(...................................................................................................
first chapter was decent then i dropped at second chapter with the first quest Conquering/ ruling a world in truth would be boring If i had written the story i would have had my mc be dropped in a character insert as wolverines brother Abilities: healing, enhanced senses, and a dimensional storage area with limited space ( since its an intimentional traveler the travel gave them the ability) . My mc wouldnt have claws or nails but since he or she would have gamer ability then he or she could develop abilties and skills by constantly using them and fighting. Develop through the wars fought Develop through daily sparing with sabertooth and wolverine Develop through learning magic Develop through learning martial arts Develop through learning science and technology studies Raise funds by storing memorabilia then selling it Raise funds by storing certain wines to develop Raise funds by investing in likes of stark industries
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It perfected cause there is not a lot of gamer novel to read ..'9/^^^-^;'hxhxhxhhxhdy^^#&&#&#&#^#^#^#^^#^;'bxbxbxbbxbxhxhhxhxhxhhhxhxhxhxvud;&×&;@;@&@&×;@&@&@&@&@&@&@&&@&×&&÷&991<@8×;@<×;@<@:×&
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author please stop and reevaluate your novel because your rushing the story too much making it hard to read especially since it has quite interesting plot point that should be taken one at a time like how he was there at the start of the universe and how it time skipped to easily and if he has gamers mind why is he so irrational with his decisions especially when going to shield for a membership position when he could just rule the world if he slowly built himself up when he escaped shield plus i felt like he probably shouldn't have left that note because he gives himself away to much but i do feel like you should have stuck with that jason bourne aspect where he's an elusive character to shield cause it makes a good side cat and mouse game especially since he has stealth and cloaking and maybe teleportation and you know what would be a better plot if you change the story to be where he lands in spain in the 14th century and he gets injured from the landing because the system can only cover him so much when he fall from the sky and he gets injured on his side and starts bleeding so he has to go through a system recovery mode turning invisible and the system turning him old to conserve energy so the system can help him recover and as he escapes from the crash site he has to has escape into a alley and turns his blood invisible as he escapes making him less visible to track and when gets into the alley he finds a cart to to have to take a rest and uses it as a wheelchair
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Aa long MC isnt beta or too generous like making others More powerful like party system stuff and maybe good romance would do and get all Infinity Stones + intteligent