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The Eternal in Twilight

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作者: The_Young_Flash

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The Multiverse diverged the moment The Celestial Tiamut - Communicator of The Celestials - fell to very Eternals that were tasked to bring him forth.
Ikaris, unable to live with what he had done, sought to end his life in the brilliance of the sun, but Arishem intervened at the last moment.
The Multiverse was in trouble.
Earth would soon be destroyed.
And the Universe would soon follow - every Universe would soon follow.
But there was a chance - a long-abandoned Celestial project. Where do you turn when the Multiverse is in trouble? Easy.... you turn to the Omniverse.
And who better to send than the most loyal Eternal?

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PsyLoRD

not really a bad novel BUT really misleading. MC doesnt have the power/memories or anything of Ikaris. maybe he was Ikaris before, but now... he is not. Also, slow novel + slow updates = 👎, if you are going for a slow novel at least have a decent update.

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Iron_Man_3000

I like the premise… but Ikaris isn’t Ikaris…. This is just a weak af male oc ….. Plus the love triangle BS….. The story is taking too long.

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MimicReads

Good as in yum Yum as in great Great as in terrific Terrific as in im done

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GoldDragonMachina

its written well. The idea is good. I just don't like how the story starts. The memory mumble jumbo, becoming flesh. The memory jumbling. It just doesn't make all too much sense to, and I don't really like it. Other than my personal story development preferences, it's good. I won't be continuing to read though.

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RandomPasserby_07

Great idea, bringing Ikaris to Twilight. And nice touch-ups with the backstory of why Arishem have to send him. I love the way you write their POV, it actually does not deviate too much from how I picture Ikaris to be in the movie eternals. Don't know in the later chapters though, with him having a kids body maybe it affect his way of thinking too. But overall it's great and looking forward to more chapters. Pls don't drop it.

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Danna_Lopez_5221

Tiene potencial, me gusto por el momento. Gracias por el capitulo ♥️. Espero que no dejes la historia, porque la trama si es muy buena. Al principio estaba dudando en pasar del primer capítulo, pero tiene una buena premisam

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