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Hogwarts : leveling up the world

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http://patreon.com/The_last_airbenderlibrary

Would you like to see Rowling's world of magic and your favourite childhood characters in a different environment, more magical than we are shown in the original. Then join our protagonist on his adventure through the world of Harry Potter. Thanks to the world enhancement system, the world of Harry Potter will gradually change beyond recognition .

Follow asmodeus and your favourite characters from different universes on a journey to create the strongest magical multiverse empire !

Yes, there were problems with the book at the beginning. I couldn't pick up the writing style, but if you look at the comments under the chapters after chapter 15, you'll realise that the book gets better with each chapter

Worlds visited by the protagonist:

Harry Potter, Marvel, Game of thrones

For all those who are afraid that the author will jump between worlds forgetting about the previous ones - in the tags of the book there is a kingdom building. This is what the protagonist does, the world of Harry Potter is the main world that the protagonist will - develop, protect, conquer !

Important note: this is my original work and although it is fanfic. I in no way claim to be completely faithful to the original, be it the world of Harry Potter or Avatar. This is my story. And I believe that those who simply rewrite the book in their retelling without changing anything are just lazy.

my patreon: The_las_airbenderlibrary

http://patreon.com/The_last_airbenderlibrary

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AlphaHost

it's an okay fanfic, i was a fun read untll the constant us of emoticons like this (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ inside the sentence structure. its truly annoying stop it.

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DarkKnight32

Author has great a ambitions but the execution is quite average if not below average. Though im sure as you gain more knowledge on writing you will improve and the next story shall be better.

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ChaoticPlayer

No Lily&Snape please🙏 [img=Mad] 😑[img=angry]

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Ict1
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Love this fanfic. Hope it doesn't dro[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]p.

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helical_chaos

Actually I like this fanfiction. But the author is very inconsistent in updating the chapters. So even if you like it , without the consistency of the author you can't appreciate it . Thank you very much . I hope that the author will update it more frequently.

5mth
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Hyuga_Tobirama

Story has potential! The author is clearly trying to build something great and he is doing good so far. As long as the story isn’t dropped then this story could go on to be something great

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After_Wing

This is the best I can to rate your story author. I know Patreon but I can complained all I want while you sit there and smug about it. Good story but I just can't stick around. ( ੭ ・ᴗ・ )੭

5mth
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N1CK999

its a good story but the ch are short

10mth
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Ardemis

I'd like the first world that they come into contact with is Game of Thrones but was the next one after that since there will be multiple worlds. ps. also the only reason why I didn't give it a higher evaluation is because of the updates I just wish it would update more frequently

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Grim_Ignotus_LWG

its one of the great stories in my library every time I get an update I'm excited so I have been on the platform for like 4 years and this is one of the best I have ever read so give it a try I wont spoil anything but its really good

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Killer46

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Caano_Booro

A great Harry Potter story, loving the magic circle introduced. Looking forward to future development of this story. Kudos to the author.[img=exp]

9mth
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Gamerz_Sal

This novel has great potential and i love the concept but there are certain things that irks me in it... Like How characters like dumbledore, nicolas flammel and grindlewald are acting subservient to MC... I understand he can give them what they want the most but even still their age, wisdom and proud character are still there... They may assist him as an elder or look forward to what he does but will not act like his thugs waiting for him command... True,This concept sits right with the no-nonsense fast pace of the novel but the character break of these major HP characters just doesnt sit right with me... Another issue I have which is quite frankly a personal choice of sorts is how MC is hinting that everything will belong to morningstar family(family he creates)... Frankly i dont like royal family troupes rather i like the concept of lord and his chosen subordinates managing the empire rather than empire belonging to a certain family just cuz its MCs family... Anyway the last one was personal preference, but except for these things the novel is still a good read for me

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Humbuub

Power scaling is so broken, it took most of the fun out of it. It's like a Max lvl player spawning on a tutorial stage or starter village.

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Zaelum

It's pretty good!. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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DetachedDreamer

I like the story, its entertaining. definitely not something to evaluate too deeply tho. it use one of the most OP abilities besides plot armor and thats the "Power of convenience." where everything conveniently seems to workout regardless of how ridiculous it is. that's a staple of a lot of fanfic so it can be overlooked. the author does seem to skim over important details. like the MC murdering 100s of millions of folk through fiery crashes, starvation, dead hospital patients, just recently born babies, etc. from him elevating the world and destroying tech. they kinda just brush this under the rug and the MC gets like a beneficial skill from killing innocent folk. lol I don't mind him killing folk but let there be actual consequences or guilt or something. this happens in one form or other over and over again thru the story so you can't really ignore it completely or id have given a better rating. overall worth a try before judging.

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Daoist_Empereur

Best hp ff that i read it just have everything from combat and comedie and everything the only thing that it sad it’s i read all of it and i have to wait for more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=strong][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]

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Finnish_man

Very good and intresting fic i do recomend but i have to mention the fic is not the most true to the oringnal story so would not recomend to pepole who want super detaild fic very good tho chaps are short? Not sure tho been reading a fic that has over 3m words and one chap has around 15k words so take that but auhtor keep up ther great work cant wait to see more i like these kinda slice-of life stories when mc is op

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Flaiver

Great novel. Unlike many other fanfictions that don’t change anything or drop the novel without making any changes to the world, here the changes begin almost immediately and radically. The story is fast but I like it, I got bored with slow stories with zero changes. The only negative is that the story has not yet been released in full and you have to wait for the chapter :(. It’s sad that such a fanfic has so few reviews and readers.

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LostWizard

Wonderful book i had it in my library for a long time but never actually read it. Had I read it back then, then I would have gotten hooked a long time ago and would have to wait a long time for each chapter, now i read it and always wait weeks for a new chapter

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