/ Book&Literature / The Animagus in DC ( Comics )
概要
Since he was born, the universe has presented him with the primordial gift, the system. His wishes would easily come true, with a little help from the universe they would make everything better. Left in the orphanage, since when you have a memory, and had a very difficult life there.
there was already a rage in his heart for his failed life, for the abuses he suffered, his classmates, there at the orphanage the watchman who also worked there mistreated him and one day I beat him up and that led to total delirium.
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1- the writing quality is poor 2- the first chapters nothing is understood about the plot and story 3- the story progresses too fast without a fixed goal 4- there are no different points of view of the different characters
chapter 6 wasn't even in English and why do feel there's things happening for no reason? FIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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I can tell with absolute certainty the author either comes from a completely different country, 90% of its written like Google translate, or they’re about 6 years old
All in all the update speed is pretty good. The major problems come from the writing style of the author. First major problems are the structure of the writing itself. The second problem is the use of the present tense makes the story feel awkward. The result is the author just dictating actions the mc takes, taking away any and all immersion. Over-all just an average novel on webnovel, with potential to be more if the author improves on his writing skills. I would recommend watching some videos on YouTube on writing stories.
Pretty nice idea of story updates are Steady in a way but the dowside is that the writing is not up to par (no disrespect) but if you fix that everything should be fine