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A Harry Potter fan has been reincarnated into the Harry Potter universe and will be attending Hogwarts, but he hasn't been reincarnated into the Boy-Who-Lived, oh no he is the lost son of another Ancient and Most Noble house, and with his knowledge of future events and his perspective on how things have come to pass, you can just bet that he is going to make one hell of a splash.
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This is a decent fanfic; it has an interesting MC and the flow isn't bad. However, I find it a little bit boring, as it is too cliched for my taste. There's Dumbledore and Ron bashing, of course, and the main character is quite predictable. On another note, I feel the story focuses too much in pureblood culture - which can be interesting, but isn't, actually, as every concept presented isn't new at all. Moreover, in my opinion, the story is too slow-paced. But I guess that isn't a bad point per se. Overall, this fanfic is decent, but it isn't too engaging, as it is clear that Dumbledore attempts in manipulating the MC won't be successful.
really great story. don't make the same mistake as me. the story is on another site but it is the same author😅 if you do just give the man/lady some pstones
I found myself reading this out of pure curiosity. As I read through the chapters I've realized that the standards that I had for the current story fanfic that I am reading what above myexpectations. I laughed so much. Please Don't Drop!
The story is lacking character depth. There is no emotional context to the dialogue, which is otherwise well written. The MC decides a minimal interference approach so as not to change canon too much, but it doesn't hint at what he plans to use the knowledge for... so we end up reading about unmade decisions and untaken actions rather than actual story content.
Good Story. I read it on FF.net and am happy that you are continuing it. Keep up the good work. .
This is an amazing story so far. I have Been on hundreds of storys and non so far have made me want yo see the story conyinued like tgis one. the goose bumps i was given were amazing please Continue the freat work
hope peter is captured and he pushes for demontors kiss for him. Also he should demand compensation from the previous administration like barty crouch(head of the dmle at that time), bagnold(minister of magic at that time) and dumbledore(chief warlock). he could demand all of their money. Also after that he should befriend harry and train him.
It's a decent story but it has a lot of underlying errors. The author lacks a true understanding of many things not just the world of HP. The fact that the protagonist tries to hide his status as heir to the Black family does not make sense. Without the authorization of the legal authorities of the ministry, no 11-year-old boy becomes heir to a family of magicians just by donning a ring. The fact that the goblins discovered it makes it impossible for him to hide it from the ministry or the other pureblood families. I also can't understand how a harem can be conceived in the world of HP. The general idea of the story is not bad but the errors in the plot that I find every time I read make it very difficult for me to give it a higher rating.Simple example: The MC calls Kretchar some time after his conversation with Walburga but the elf doesn't know who the MC is. That's ridiculous as Walburga should have told her the good news.
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I absolutely love how the MC is of the black house its a create story that protreys dumbledore as a more evil charter while also keeping it intressting since some of this might be spoilery I'll add the spoil thing but the chapters are so long I've been read this for over 10 hours and have just reached chapter if you like long books I can not recommend this enough its greater and I absolutely love although at the start I was kinda iffy if I wanted to continue to read this but then it just got better and better and better I hope the author never drops this as its super good with its writing and keeps ya hooked.
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great fiction for fanfiction and I like the way the author is taking direction of his characters and made them more realistic alive. I like paper cut-outs they are always being willing to be more engaging reader
This is a righteously ball-bustingly brilliant take on the Harry Potter verse!! There’s sciences in here that I think every hp fan would have loved to have seen happen and some really clever turns as the story has progressed. The author has wonderfully portrayed the beginnings of an alternate path from canon which has flowed consistently so far. Love this book and want to see it continue!!!
This is amazing so far. The main character is not presented in the typical fan fiction way and is not overly powerful. Over all the development and progress of the story shows that the author knows what they are talking about and does not make it seem rushed.
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One of the best HP fics on WN.. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Most certainly quite a interesting and intriguing book that has caught my attention got me hooked on reading it even more especially with the MC being the lost son/their of The House Of Black not to mention all the different changes he has done as well his distrust of Dumbledore and what he done to The Malfoy Family look forward to reading more of this book quite intrigued by what will happen next especially during the trial of Peter Pettigrew not to mention overall this book has been quite interesting and intriguing in every way that I can't wait until ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Writing quality is acceptable. Plot is chiched and a lot of information is dumped from the first chapter itself, making it a pain to read and remember. A nice attempt.
My favorite Harry Potter FF that I’ve read so far. I started reading on RR and came here to comment that it needs to continue on and loose the hiatus tags.
So this story till now it’s amazing, i hope that author never drops it, the mc is badass, he has a dark Phoenix as a familiar, there isn’t much i can say about the story without spoilers , so he’s obviously going for a good root, he doesn’t care about canon, and isn’t afraid to change it, Just read it till at least chapter 10 to give your opinion