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Start in Ninja World with Prototype of System

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作者: Hero_Of_Charity

4.83 (25 レビュー結果)

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-I had no talent in writing
-My main language is Indonesian, this Novel was Write in Indonesian, Translated with Gtranslate, and Fix by myself with Grammarly
-Just Write it while boring, have your expectation as low as possible
-Release, 1Ch/Day, 2Ch/Day if I am so Boring
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Kyo reincarnated in Ninja World as Uchiha family. when he waiting for his Cheat nothing coming in six years, when Kyo start Chakra Refinement the Prototype System that hidden inside his soul activated. But, No gacha, No point, No system features. at this point Kyo just "Fine, I'll Do It By Myself"

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Hero_Of_Charity

Prototype of System is a concept that I accidentally thought of after reading a bunch collection of Chinese nationalism fanfics that use the idea of a system. Ten years ago, the concept of systems was a lot of fun to read, whether it was a character suddenly becoming an Op or something. But I'm sure I'm not the only one getting sick of reading too many novels where a character is very dependent on the system, so let's switch it; how about switching a character who relies on a system to live? Let's make one where a character builds his system instead of the type of system itself limiting the Character. A character who thinks out of the box, eccentric, is not limited to modern veiled racism thoughts, but is also not tied to rigid concepts of right and wrong, and thinks freely without the influence of any party. This fanfic may not even live up to all my expectations above, but sadly it's my best effort.

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Ancientdatiost_014

love it keep it up. and i thick you should read MHA: code. It has similar pover and you could maybe get ideas from it . .. ... .. .. .. .

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_VOIDLESS_

mc finally started thinking but still six years wasted......................................................................................

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Idealist

It's about driving, it's about power. We stay hungry, we devour. Put in the work, put in the hours, and take what's ours. Finally... Finally, this novel is what I've been seeking for so long. The development, likeable MC, etc Keep it up! Semangat!

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handokyhya

The potential of this one is......... strong af like yeah. I hope maybe there’s world hopping and he will travel to Bleach or maybe smth similar.

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THE_BLACK_ONE

this book is good it is amazing. author don't drop this book or I'm going to come to your house and kill you.......................................

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ZHODIAXK

Bang,raw indonya punya lebih banyak chapter atau sama aja?

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nonexistent_re

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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ShatteredMusic

Very good and well written book with fresh new concept in terms of development ,cant wait to read more. --------------‐-----------------------

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Daoisto408Vc

It was an excellent story. There were no grammar issues, the plot was engaging, and the main character was interesting. Unfortunately it appears that the author has dropped the story.

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Thehighesthol1

This is the FF I was looking for with Anti Hero MC and not naive, has its own purpose instead of following the original protagonist who usually takes the role passively instead of actively.

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dmaksmfSMF

decent novel as long as you don't take it seriously.

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Meliodas_

does anyone know it's raw chapters link? ?? ? ?? ?? ??? ? ? ?? ?? ?? jsujdjjssjsjsiksejejjeejsjksossuhg rid jusjsksis

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13lack_Shinobi

Good writing, excellent plot, good pacing, decent chapter lengths. Honestly this is a great story hopefully you upload more chapters and complete the story instead of dropping.

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Savitar_12

can't wait for the next one................................,................................................................................

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Sakkaku_no_mori

how long have i read a good ff naruto.... this is one of the best ff naruto I've read so far... mc felt alive and the story development balanced so far....

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HotWetDream

well written, despite being a translated version of Indonesian to English. Good concept of prototype system. recommended to be read. also, I like the MC depicted differently as of his other clan members.

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Arivez
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semangat bro , jangan sampe ga tamat y minim sampe tamat lah jadi tiap hari bisa kasih 1 batu hehehehe selamat gramar ny masih bisa d memgerti g masalah

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