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Hey author, if you continue this story then I have a suggestion that you could do if you haven't already planned. So from the beginning we can see that the MC went from nice to scum because of some incident which eventually made him do something he regrets. So basically for the girl that he rapes, I think after he gets out of prison somehow then you should let him find her and make her his lover or harem member depending on which way your going. But make it like he does all he can to apologize and she can still hate him and he does everything for her for a long time for her to slowly change her feelings about him eventually falling in love with him. That's a suggestion I recommend since from the first chapter you just made me feel really bad and I don't want that to be the conclusion of the situation
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I'm standby for this 🤣🤣🤣🤣 ,, still waiting for our op mc Hope will make to this story to end btw don't forget all his harem 🤣🤣🤣 ,, and that is why I give u 5 star
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