/ Fantasy / A Journey That Changed The World.
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Archer Bennett—happy with his current life, is suddenly stabbed, losing everything he loves. However, he quickly finds out that death is not always final. Transmigrated into a magical world—as a child named Archer Ashguard—he finds himself abandoned. Lost and alone, with mysterious and potent magical abilities. He sets out on an adventure that’s sometimes fun, sometimes serious, and full of girls!
Join Archer as he embarks on a legendary journey that will change the world.
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Honestly, any story with a dragon can't be bad. Dragons are just that cool and make anything better. So read this or you know, don't. I'm just writing some text here, can't really make you do anything other than read this text MUAHAHAHAHAHA
Archer is really immature and a psychopath don't what's wrong with him doing Humpy Dumpy in middle of no where killing dogs nad eating their hearts out. That's some psycholathic tendency my boi... and the way he laughs at every second while talking with girls is really creepy... when he stares at dark elf chest her thought was he was admiring her beauty not seeing it lustfully it's like peeking at your neighboring bench answer sheet and when get caught the examiner thinks he just clearing some doubts. Doesn't make sense right?
The characters are life like and the start of the story was very interesting. I would like to see more of Archer and adventures through this world, looking forward for more chapters from the author!
I kinda love this novel but couldn't understand why novel has so many chapters cuz mc is really getting stronger fast.but after chapter 80 now I understand very much.cuz after that story goes back in time and forward.constantly changes pov. if there're 2 chapter mc's pov 2 chapter must have another persons pov or diff timeline.SPOİLER and how can a river made him go sooo far away from his homeland.river took him kingdoms away from his home.couldn't got back home by flying.he decided to do some side work then after 2 years he wanted to go back,did not take a day to go there.SPOİLER I kinda tired to read back in time chapters.Author says it's importent for later but it's not related to what's happening previus chap.if he wants to write those back in time parts for someone in the future or someplace in the future he could write it after he introduce it.
i like the duality of the MC and the story so far. it doesn't have too many system window notifications but it's brought up every few chapters.the dream segments are quite annoying, if he's that worried about home then can always use the necklace to see if she's ok....the constant changing of character perspective happens randomly and should flow better.overall the story is good. i enjoy it.
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Writing is good worth looking into if you are new reader of this genre as for old readers who recycled this is the type of content you are probably sick of: prophecy child or whatnot meant to save the world or continent, MC looks at women and loses his marbles plus meddlesome hero complex. This is the buildup premise that might change. I didn't read the locked chaps.
I've been on here for months but this is my first review, and I've gotta say this book is amazing.the story and world building is greatthe MC is smart and decisively ruthless when provoked but isn't always out for blood.overall I love this book and am praying enough people read it and enjoy it so that the author has a reason to keep writing.
GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i wanna read more, it seems like a good story. the chars are really good so far. i've read much worse on here. give it ago its worth a read.
its a well thought out start to the novel, the two characters are well written. i read the authors brothers novel. so here i am, you should give it ago.
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Love the story so far cant wait until more gets released. I followed the authors brother and now im here and dont regret reading this, You should give it a read.
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I Stopped reading after 200 Chapters, its weird how this book will be really in depth on unneeded stuff as every detail of just a random house that was walked into witch no one cares that much about unless its a returning house, but then On other things it makes no sense. A huge thing that bothers me is the MC will meet people or People will meet the MC and just 100% trust each other and its like uhm no they have 0 reason to trust each Other. A big example is his "General". Idk the progression is just weird to me it feels like the story doesnt Flow together, when something important is happening with the MC then a random 3 chapters of just non needed info at the point gets dumped into the story abruptly just feels out of place and cuts the Flow of the story really bad. also the flashes to the "future" is a little annoying. Past Flashbacks make sense in certain situations but future ones can ruin a lot of Suspense on certain in counters. Either way i wish you luck but i am dropping this i tried but i just cant get drawn into this book that is all over the place.
I came here again to do another review because I just can't help it. I love this work and I can firmly say that it is my favorite, every time I read a new chapter I get goosebumps, especially in Frostholm's story, where I read and re-read several times. I would like to congratulate the author for the great work, I'm already reading it again for the fourth time!
a very nice book....but author can you also tell us about the ranks of other characters and not just the MCs
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A shameless author here. Experience the madness of a boy who lost everything and went crazy. Who loved and lost, join in on his newfound adventures as he explores the new world he finds himself in.