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Wow! I must commend this book... It's tough and the synopsis is catchy. Keep up the good work .
I keep loving this story more n more and just hope Jiho will survive and stop the bloodshed... And the way this cycle keep repeating itself makes me chill Oh my see goosebumps huh Ride on dear author
It's interesting how you can write a book so vividly and the phase of the story is very smooth unlike the ones I'm writing... well to those reading this review if you like eastern fantasy you might find this interesting
ah, i love this one. i am really interested in novels with historical background. silla is what i recall before joseon, right? the narration and the ambience feels so real, and the fight scene with no onomatopeia. not all writers can do that. this is great story!
I don't know what to write, but this story is so good!!! I really enjoyed it kekekeke
great book author, only read through the first two chapters and now I can't stop
This reader has completed at least five chapters upon writing this review. Where do we start, oh alright. Firstly, I would love to commend you on making a Korean novel that’s based on royal status and the imbalance between social classes. I appreciate the dynamics between the two brothers so far after reading the first five chapters. Now, on to the review proper. I really want to enjoy your story, but there are way too many grammatical errors, especially in the synopsis. Also, I was expecting something around post-reincarnation because the synopsis already gave way too much information about what the story is about. Two princes who were exiled then killed, then reincarnated after a hundred years. To be honest I was confused about the time period of the first chapter, because we were taken to a fast-paced scene of a chase going on between the princes and the guards. What I also noticed is that you inserted character descriptions in the middle of the scene that I almost forgot we were in the heat of a chase. So far, your premise has potential and is very interesting, I just think you need to execute it better. TLDR for the things you need to change: - Remove the character descriptions in between a fast-paced action scene where the princes are being chased after by guards. This ruins the reading experience. - Please fix your dialogues. The guards saying “how dare you” sounds a little unrealistic, maybe try something in between a professional and commanding tone, like “Halt!” - Change your dialogue format. It’s inconsistent in terms of style. This is a novel, not a script. Replace “Jiho: ___” with “______”, Jiho said. - Tweak your synopsis a bit. Don’t give too much information away unless it’s a timeskip. I guess I can excuse saying the two brothers died because they get reincarnated, but don’t narrate more details like “who killed who.” It spoils the readers. So far, here is my rating for your book: Writing Quality: 4* Updating Stability: 5* Character Design: 4* Story Development: 4* World Background: 4* So far, your world is very interesting and has potential to be in K-Dramas. I can visualize everything clearly. Your novel isn’t bad, it just needs improvement like everyone of us. So this is it. I think I’ll end my review with best wishes on your writing journey!
I was not a fan of the present point of view being based on the past tense but this story proved me wrong. It was so vivid, that it got my imaginative, I am able to see what I read vividly.Beautiful, keep it up.I recommend it as it is a must read
I have fallen in love with the two princes 🥰🥰🥺🤧 They are not like the other ML I've read about. I don't know I just have this emotional attachment towards them😅 I love the story it's not lacking in anything. Amazing job Author 👏
An enchanting tale of love and adventure, 'Moonlit Dreams' intertwines magic and destiny, captivating readers with its charming characters."
Author I love reading your book. It's the first time for me to read such a genre and I love it. The world setting and the plot are well done. The characters are it for me. I am looking foward to read more.
Even just briefly reading the first chapter, I've found myself absorbed in the main characters. Wonderful synopsis, it hypes up the plot well.
The compelling premise of a reincarnation cycle with a recurring tragic destiny is captivating. The storyline delves into the intricacies of fate, weaving a tale where tragedy unfolds in a relentless cycle, adding depth and resonance to the narrative.
A sad beginning for the two young brothers, I hope they take what rightfully belongs to them in the end. . Intriguing plot, and a good description as well. .
The story had an intriguing premise about the cycle of rebirth and conflict. It kept me curious about the brothers' fate. I totally recommend it.
absolutely love the storyline, can't wait to finish reading the rest. the feelings are Definitely there 🤌🏻
The plotline written in the synopsis was really interesting and intriguing. It shows great potential in how the story itself can be expanded to become something new each time the two brothers will be reincarnated... It was indeed an amazing plotline... Also, the writing style is very easy to follow even for a newbie reader like me. And the few chapters that I read so far are very well written. Keep up the good work, Author.
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This is an excellent book. The story unfolds before your eyes like a chocolate melting in a pot. Kudos Author, you've made a masterpiece!