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概要
in a advanced world where video games are indistinguishable from real life. The newest game with a time difference appears called Gu online. what would happen if a former player from 2 years into the future regress. with all his in game knowledge and advantages.
I'm a new writer just doing this for fun so please don't be a grammar nasee. I'm writing this all on my phone. I'm also just gonna upload what i have currently, and take my time to release more.
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bro this is lit 🔥🔥🔥 the pace is amazing bro, RI fanfic tend to drop because they made it slow pace to match the RI pace but yours is good pace bro. the only downside is the speech format it would be great if you change it in the future to "..." for speaking and '...' for thought. Probably because I used to that but if you can't or you won't, it won't matter I can get past that bcoz your fanfic is fking great man. My power stone now belongs to this fic, I give it to that poison RI fic before but yeah I like this one better, I hope you won't drop it. But thanks to that poison RI fic I discovered this so yeah shout out to him although his fic is rather slow paced.
Even though it’s a mid overall the story is pretty good to me, it just needs more depth but I’ll change my review when it gets better in the future
RI, nice. For my story, I usually put all the text into ChatGPT and say: *Correct this:*. With this strategy, you will have basically perfect grammar, spelling, and capitalization.
Pls More! More! More! Pls More! More! More! Pls More! More! More! Pls More! More! More! Pls More! More! More! Pls More! More! More! Pls More! More! More!
Love this story, a bit biased because of RI but love what you did with it. Hoping for more chapters soon ^^
Mam you are good at thisㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
My story is less then mid in my opinion.