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a normal salary man who took revenge on his cheating wife.
I am Takashi Yamato I used to love my wife a lot. But recently I just found out my wife is cheating on me. More worse part is her cheating partner is my nemesis.
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just...what have i read? bruh i need to wash my eyes now. i am a reader and got goosbumbs from the amount of cringe here and i don't want to imaginethe feeling of writing it...overall a mess grammar and writing style with a disgusting mc and lot of emojis while mc crying aloud how he is sad because his wife slept with another bla bla bla...author you can start by reading other novels first see how things work try to understand or even copy their style if you can, stop using imoji on novel because it just disturb the pace and no one likes them. good luck for your next.
1+2+1+3+1)/5=1.6 sincerely, congratulations to the author for taking a brave step and making the effort to make this story. however the story sucks. the grammar is plain bad. the paragraphs' lack some work. like more capitalisation. and stories that try to mix english and japanese just feel like they're lacking in quality.