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Your story is reallly similar to super gene. From the teleporting to another world to the first soul he gets the levels of genes and needing to eat to get stronger etc. so far there is little difference in the two stories and super gene has something like 3000 chapters.

Forgot to mention about pregnant woman drinking during childbirth anyone from earth would know this is bad yet he keeps letting her drink…

I’m on ch 96 so far a pretty good story but for a reincarnated person from earth who was supposed to be the head of a large business then the MC is not using his knowledge to the full potential. I get the business aspect of it but most people could figure out how to improve tools, weapons, strategy, technology etc from a medieval time to something more modern. Like even making a basic cannon since he is going to be fighting lots. Electricity, windmills, farming tools, axels and spring for wagons, rubber wheels come to mind. There was mention of a magical world yet the only magical thing so far is the MC has mind control and very limited at that. There is mention of archmages but they don’t seem to do anything magical besides making potions which to me is a fancy way to say doctor/pharmacist or better yet alchemist. There is no talk of schools either like at all that’s a basic thing to implement to improve things over time. These are just some ideas. Also don’t forget that his wife from eath was supposed to of crossed over but MC has no thoughts about it at all. These are just some ideas.

This is one of the better stories that have come out recently. I only have two issues with it one being some of the grammer or words used don’t make sense but you still kind of get what the author is trying to say and the other is the constant recap of the previous chapter that takes up from a quarter to a third of the chapter and sometimes the recap is almost the whole chapter this feels like a waste of coins/free passes. Even with these negatives the story is good enough that I would still read it just hope the author would stop with the recaps if people forget what happened they can go back and read the previous chapter instead of wasting so much of a chapter.

Your book starts off very interesting with the copy concept. A couple decisions the MC makes that to me make no sense and nothing is explained is one when fighting the creature with high darknes ability why not copy it since he only had an intermediate one. Two when fighting the fire lion in the trial when not copy the blaze strike skill? And the part where he goes to the desertt I get what your trying to do but this part of the story is really boring and to many chapters with no progress makes it boring. You need to wrap up the desert much quicker this is really hard to read and hoping it ends soon I liked the beginnin but at this point it’s hard to keep going. I would even consider rewriting this part to condense it into a few chapters instead of the like 15-20 it is so far.