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4.44 (14 レビュー結果)
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This is about a 19 year old boy who's a big undertalefan, when suddenly a f##ing plane hit his home.
He suddenly woke up in a white room with a man who said he can make 3 wishes.
*not my cover*
*I don't own undertale*
*I'll try to make more chapter's in my free time*
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レビューを書くHey author here .-. Just here to say I’m probably not gonna be updating for a while... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I like the premises but you should mosT likely build the world up a little more and adding a power system seems right and just some more surroundings like where is he an kingdom? Whats the past behind the dungeons? Who is ruling said kingdom and what role do they play overall. Also add a tad bit more personality to Chase as he has had multiple sans experiences so him not being the sanest person but keeping it together would suit him. this is just a review so do what u want but ill read no matter what because sans.🪓
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So far, its good, I dont know where the plot is going, but hey, screw plot! Were not here for that, were here to have fun reading a story which can go in any random direction. Anyway, its been good reading so far, and Im patiently waiting for more chapters whenever they get released.
Me encanta tu historia, 😎👍💗 no puedo esperar para las próximas actualizaciones, me pregunto si terminará metiéndose con el X-event para joder a Ink y a XGaster.
oh god, the mc has a system and he's one of those murder hobo min-maxers who kills everybody for a scrap of xp and rewards.
I wish you updated more, this was really good 😔 EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
really good story I want to have more come out soon.........................................................................................
Its a pretty good story ngl. The only problem is the updating stability and the grammar. The grammar is pretty good, there are barely any mistakes. Overall I gove it a 10/10.
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The story is coming soon
HE'S GANNA BE FATEL *look on the front of the novel* ********************************************************************************!***************************************************************************
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