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概要
John sacrificed himself to protect Earth and resist the gods, only to be betrayed and killed by his best friend.
To his surprise, after death, he was reborn just before the launch of the game "Gods Descend."
In this life, he vows not to let the tragedy repeat!
Upon entering the game, John masters the power of reincarnation and unexpectedly awakens an SSS-level talent—"Plunder"!
By killing monsters, he can plunder their attribute points; by killing boss-level elites, he can plunder their talents, skills, and special attributes.
Killed a tusked wild boar: Physique +1
Killed a bloodthirsty wolf: Speed +1
Killed an elite boss: Gained 10 skill points
Killed an epic boss: Gained 10 luck points
Killed a legendary boss: Gained an S-level talent, Spell Combo
...
As John grows through killing, when the game merges with reality and the gods descend, they finally realize that there is an existence on Earth that they cannot provoke.
John: "I will only make one move. If you survive, you may leave."
In the next second, the ultimate forbidden spell activates: Ragnarok!
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レビューを書くgood story. the way the mc treats sini at night honestly disgusts me , like bud she's crying from pain and literally no mention of pleasure . it makes me skip the entire chapter , please improve .
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This is one of the best novels i've ever read. The MC is moderatly overpowered with a great plotline and world building. Just need to adjust some information cause it's confusing . Otherwise I really love the story and most of all the mc who is overpowered but not arrogant. Keep up the good work.
It has a good story. Just don’t understand why the main character wants to cause pain to the women he’s with.
I really like this book so far and hope it keeps going! But there r 2 things that suck.. the first is that some pages take more then 1 pass or take a lot of coins... like can u not be so greedy!! And the secis about the book.... Y is the MCs attitude kinda a shity especially when hes screwing the girls!!?? He doesnt give a shit if there im pain or not and honestly its bullshit and something needs to be done about it!! It doesnt matter if its a book or real life u dont to what the MC is doing and for an author ti actually write something like this shows what kind of person u r and its going to make people not want to read anything u put out!!
It's hard to describe my feeling of reading this book. The plot of the novel is very interesting, and I really like the story design, which gives people a sense of gradual progress and good rhythm!
I do very much enjoy this novel and think it's pretty good! But that doesn't mean I don't have constructive criticism for you as an author. Let's start with the positives: 1) You pay attention to the math/stats! It always bugs me when authors of LitRPGs mess up the math for stats, skills, damage numbers, etc. 2) The main character still struggles despite being OP. My favorite characters are the kind that are OP, but never OP enough, which requires them to keep getting stronger. Now for some negatives/constructive criticism: 1) The main character, John, has no backstory from before he started playing the game. After he regresses, we don't know whether he has any friends, family, a job, debts, responsibilities, etc. These things are important to forming an understanding of a character and how they became who they are. For example, being an orphan could mean he learned self-reliance and to be tough. Which could then translate into why he never wanted to submit to the gods later. 2) The R18/Naughty scenes, while not bad, are kind of all the same. It's him dominating until she begs for mercy and him not being fully satisfied even when the woman has much higher stats than him. Mix it up a little. Sini is always asking for help, so maybe do a threesome or more. Maybe have him actually be satisfied for once. 3) The world building is very odd and vaguely defined. It supposedly takes place on Earth in the year 2025(meaning next year), but the Earth it shows us is so vastly different from the one we know of. There's noble families that control multiple countries, ancient martial families that are above even them, empires, full-dive game pods that allow people to game for months on end with negative effects on people's health, slavery is seemingly an accepted practice, etc. None of this is explained very well since the focus is on the game world. So, I'm wondering why all this overly complicated world building for Earth is even here. Maybe simplify the worldbuilding for Earth and focus the worldbuilding on the game world. The game world is more interesting anyway. It's not easy doing worldbuilding for multiple worlds in one novel. Novels like "The Death Mage Who Doesn't Want A Fourth Time" prove it can be done, but that's an exception, not the rule. 4) The side characters are not that helpful to the MC John, despite how much they and he tries to make them helpful. It's mostly him dragging them along to level up while they can't help much. They don't have to be as strong as the main character, but they should at least be able to lighten his load. But they can't seem to do that. None of them can keep up with him or contribute to him in any meaningful way. If you want good examples of how to make side characters that are helpful to the main character after the main character invests in making them stronger to help him out, then read any of Toika/Toy Car's novels. All of them are great LitRPGs with side characters that are not just side characters to the main character. They are his irreplaceable partner in battle. They compliment each other for their weaknesses and shortcomings. They know that the main character can't be everywhere at once or take on the entire world by themselves. And the banter between them is some of the most enjoyable parts of the novels! I know this is a lot to read and kudos to you author if you read it all. I write all this because I believe that you have the potential to do even better. This novel is already quite enjoyable, and it(or even another later work of yours) could be even better!
ネタバレを明かすThe best thing about this novel is its pacing. In 200 chapters MC of other novels usually just crosses newbie phase, while here it's almost endgame near ch. 230. The plot is decent enough. Cons - - Worst R 18 scenes I've seen. Like seriously author bro if ur gonna copy paste at least copy from someone else's novel. All your scenes are exactly the same with only different names. - Inconsistent names used I recommend it if u can ignore the cons
great story. power system seems kinda backwards given the sheer number of attributes being plundered. the biggest problem though are the terrible lewd scenes. worst I've ever read hands down. not even a single one is good.
Great read so far, my only real complaint with this is the lack of world building. That being said the story works just fine as is and does not suffer from the lack of background.
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The Sss grade skill + determination + handsome = all out op. make more great story in this novel.
Wonder full novel, Really good for passing time and chilling. The main character is also Op. And the novel is fast paced( not too much). Please continue the work author. 👍🤝
I came here because of the shelter game and found another novel worth my time. So many throw SSS on the cover and just OP from go. This character has a true SSS skill that takes thought and care to fully utilize. Thank you for not just "Here's an SSS and your a god". This will be one that I keeps me looking for the next chapter.