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概要
This is a story about a young man named Steve who reincarnated in the world of Naruto after his death. However, he is not born into a Kekkei Genkai clan like Uchiha or Hyuga but was given a karma seal in the beginning.
Steve is determined to make the most of his situation and sets out to explore the world of Naruto.
What to expect:
1. Weak to Strong main character.
2. Lots of training and genin and chunin missions that the MC will get
3. Some arcs will be adapted from movies, fillers, and novels. There will be original Arcs too.
4. Plot would be similar at the start but will change later on.
5. Smart and confident main character.
6. Some characters would be from Boruto too.
7. I will try to write character development of other oc characters besides mc.
8. MC reincarnates during the Kakashi era.
Warning:
1. MC won’t be always winning
2. No R18 or harem( There might be romance but I am not 100% sure regarding that. I only have a few ideas regarding it now)
3. The story progression can be slow.
4. There will be deaths.
5. Don’t expect too accurate timelines.
PS: This is my first fanfic. I will try to write it to the best of my capabilities. Comments are welcomed. I hope you guys provide constructive criticism regarding it and I will try to write bigger chapters as the story progresses.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto characters only the oc characters are my property.
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It has a lot of promise, a great premise, and plenty of heart. I can't see any overt errors which is great. The present tense may be a little hard for some people to get used to but that would be my biggest complaint.
Good story, I like the MC, his eventual powerset, and his temperament. The story has a lot of potential and is still quite early so give it a read for yourself to find out.
I like how you have written your character and at the same time hate it. He, being a reincarnator, should have high spiritual energy. Also, he should have all chakra types due to having the karma mark, especially since it was given to him by the otsuski God. Also, the fact that he is a genius yet can not recognize it would make sense if he were a regular child, but as person who has 30 years of life experience he would be able to tell the difference between his new body and thought process compared to his older body. the only way this all makes sense is that his memories were fragmented to pieces, and he only knows the bare minimum of the Naruto plot, which is not the case with him only having blurred memories.
Sorry, but I think I'll stop at this point, the fic is good and there are not so many mistakes, but I started reading the fic in order for him to get at least one of the Otsutsuki powers, such as Sharingan, Byakugan, Sage Body, at least proximity to everyone elements and their fusion, but no, he did not receive any of this, so on this I say goodbye to you and wish you good luck
I know it is not my place to tutor or dictate a style of a novel but I do have a right to criticize given a review, just a reminder to any- Criticism does not mean 'not liking'. . and here I go: I have an issue with the bracket thing... displaying emotions and tones on the bracket thing and that drew me a line- between reading a novel and a movie script. Personally this Idea of someone reincarnating in the Narutoverse is epic and mostly dreamt off so you immediately have an audience but the ton of infos you'd have to consider with every future move you make might sound daunting but reading this shows your IQ on the verse and given how the mc's every action moved along the narratives of other well-known characters I'd have to say that this is a great work.
Muito bom! Ser reencarnado na geração de obito,rin e Kakashi com o selo do karma é muito promissor. Espero que o MC desenvolva ainda mais o estilo vento, como danzo por exemplo, ele era bom com o estilo vento, aprenda o rasengan, a outra versão feita pelo momoshiki, o rasendan que é como uma bala e evidentemente o futon: rasenshuriken!
"Naruto: The Apostle of God" is a novel that presents a captivating narrative and interesting characters that keep the reader hooked on the story. From the beginning, the author manages to create a tense and mysterious atmosphere that extends throughout the chapters. The description of the characters, both physically and emotionally, is detailed and evocative, which increases the reader's immersion in the story. In addition, the author is able to create realistic and entertaining dialogues between the characters, allowing the reader to engage with them and the story. The author also shows notable skills in narrative and character building. From the description of the characters' thoughts and emotions in a monotonous and aimless environment to the ability to switch perspective and voice, the author demonstrates great storytelling ability. Furthermore, the description of Steve's reincarnation process and the introduction of Otsutsuki God from the world of Naruto adds a new dimension to the plot and increases suspense for anime and manga fans. The novel presents a well-developed world and interesting characters that invite the reader to keep reading. From the detailed description of the village of Konoha and the geographical divisions that exist within it to the friendship between Satoru and Bob (also known as Uchiha Hideki) that feels authentic, every detail feels carefully thought out to keep the reader immersed in the story. Overall, "Naruto: The Apostle of God" is a well-written novel that presents an intriguing plot, interesting characters, and notable narrative skills. Each chapter leaves the reader wanting to know more about the story and the characters, making it a must-read for Naruto fans and readers looking for an exciting and captivating story.
The writing is pretty great and the author updates daily so thats a plus point. This is fan fiction about an average joe-Steve getting reincarnated by truck-Kun into the Naruto universe. The mc is given a special karma seal by Otsutsuki. There are references of anime memes, of another anime as well. Aside from the original Naruto characters the author added his own ones too. I personally like Hideki "Bob" Uchiha. This is great fan fic still waiting for updates.
This is my first time reading this type of novel and I loved it. Waiting for more chapters.
At the beginning I thought that it's going to be a usual iseaki story. But from what I have seen, you added a twist, which makes it more unique. Keep it up!
Selfish Author review here, This fanfiction would be a bit slow. So, If you have any ideas you want to recommend please comment. I am open to suggestions.
Very good story. Keep updating[img=recommend]Keep updating[img=recommend]Keep updating[img=recommend]Keep updating[img=recommend]Keep updating[img=recommend]
I read this novel thoroughly and it's safe to say it doesn't disappoint. It is a pretty uncommon concept at least to me. Please keep continuing this novel author and update
naruto world is a thing for me. I love to see what the story has in store. keep writing 🔥
This novel is a fascinating blend of adventure and fantasy, as Steve navigates the challenges and opportunities that come with reincarnating in the world of Naruto. The creative take on the familiar setting keeps the narrative fresh and engaging, and fans of the original series will surely appreciate this new perspective.
Steve's Reincarnation in the World of Naruto" offers an engaging perspective on the well-known Naruto universe. The protagonist's unique journey, starting with a karma seal rather than a Kekkei Genkai, adds an intriguing twist to the story and invites readers to explore the world alongside him
This is my first time reading a fan-fic novel and the story line was pretty good. I love the descriptions and world background, the grammar is lovely. This book is a promising one. Good luck Author 👍👍
At First it looks like nothing new and the same old concept but it's not the same old after all....also the descriptions are pretty nice and the toppings of emotions...
I like the setting where MC has reincarnated with Kama seal in midst of the second shinobi and third shinobi war. Nice concept. Keep updating man. I want more!!!!