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In his previous life Jack was a huge martial arts fan. From boxing to taekwondo he slowly mastered them all during his life. After watching the the Saiyan saga of dragon ball z he meets with a unfortunate accident. Next thing he knows he wakes up staring at Piccolo telling him he will train him for the next year. Excited to taking his love for martial arts to the next level, Luke now known as Gohan, begins his journey to become the strongest
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Your fanfic has potential, but you need to fix your grammar. I recommend using Grammarly to fix some of your sentences. Also, what was the point of him having a son? When he got reincarnated, he just brush it off like it was nothing.