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A brilliant modern-day man with unparalleled knowledge in science, engineering, and warfare is reincarnated into Ancient Rome by a powerful god. Gifted with extraordinary abilities, he embarks on a mission to reshape Rome into an unstoppable empire. As he navigates the political and military landscape, he introduces advanced technologies and strategies that propel Rome beyond its historical limitations. However, he must tread carefully, keeping his powers a secret while forming alliances and outmaneuvering rivals.
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this novel has many problems. One of these problems is the... ...chapter length. Not many people have time to hear a whole essay of a chapter. A second problem I have is the repetition of words. For example, his plans for Rome and his wish to make a great empire. I understand his goal for the first time I hear it. However, when you repeat that again and again, when a new technology that he adds in... ...combines with his goals repeating again, it gets tedious and it gets extremely annoying. And for the third issue I have with this novel is the character development. Marcus, the MC, we know how he got there, but we don't see him grow. And the Chief and the other side characters are mostly ignored or forgotten about. So yeah, that's why I gave it this score. Fast storytelling, lack of character development, and way too long chapters, man. If I want to look at an essay, I should just ask my teacher. To give me a example of an essay.
Author should make mc conquer the world he needs to make air planes. so he needs to make hot air balloons first as to get your people to understand flying is very real. And then needs to design engines for farm work and vehicles. But the knowledge on how to make it all should be kept very closely by the government. let people buy vehicles but if it stops working they would need to pay someone from the government to come and fix it or take it to them. so the technology isn’t stolen.
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Vou ser o mais honesto e tentar não ser desrespeitoso,mas a história é uma bagunça,literalmente é uma bagunça. Cara,uma armadura de placas faz um homem a droga de um tanque de guerra =_= Atravessar essa coisa é virtualmente impossível sem uma sorte miserável ou uma cavalaria boa. Não sei se o exercito do prota foi completamente equipado com isso,embora o lógico seria fazer isso(famoso ditado qualidade sobre quantidade) O desenvolvimento do mundo é lento,eu gosto que na obra o desenvolvimento de cidade demora(porque demora de fato na vida real)mas cara,um monólogo inteiro do mc,sem sal,sem gosto Não consegue te prender muito,nem vou falar do negócio de Roma enfrentar o povo aleatório por gerações....cara roma existe nessa bagaça a menos de uma década. Resumo o exército e a construção dos caps deixam muito a desejar,as faltas de consequências também é bem paia E agora vamos a algo que na minha opinião ou seria limitado ou se trocaria por algo diferente. O prota por algum motivo ganhou chakra do dez caudas Não preciso falar,não combina Seria legal um sistema do domínio livre Valyriano + linhagem de alto valyriano por seus paralelos com a Roma antiga. Ou talvez ele pegar o corpo do Hércules,a magia de medeia,a perícia de armas de heitor,a invulnerávildade de Aquiles mais seu domínio de armas,as memórias de Majoriano,Trajano,Gaius Julius Cesar,Marcus Antônio,Belisário,Constantino Octavius Augustus e Marcus Aurelius Não tão op(inferno,até um sistema de invocação de generais romanos ia ser foda) Faz do cara um romano do nivel de um heroi,com conhecimento militar e politico que o fariam ser o líder romano(mas mortal) Enfim é a minha opinião,eu realmente precisa desabafar isso
i don't really get the gist of the story, he uses his genjutsu multiple times to ensure loyalty amongst his people and also uses it a lot of times to "persuade" various leaders that rome is their future so why bother be cautious with other city-states, settlements, and tribes if he can use his genjutsu towards the leader and to the people to make them loyal? Why bother with strategizing if he can use genjutsu? I don't quite get the logic behind this one
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