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This is the start of a young girl named Mew who begins her Pokemon Journey. A young girl raised and can understand Pokemon begins her journey to become a Pokemon trainer with Eevee and Pikachu. Together, they meet good friends, evil enemies, and adventures beyond their imaginations. See how the young girl and her friends, human and Pokemon across all regions in the world of Pokemon.
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it looks interesting but I'd recommend you go through and fix up the writing a bit the Grammer isn't bad a few mistakes here and there it's just the structure of the writing needs a bit of work if you make it more smooth for the readers this story could pop off I can tell you love this story and it looks good it just needs a bit of a touch up also I'd recommend you go through and fix the Grammer mistakes in the beginning especially so it draws people in more. I do wish you all the luck on this story and your adventure as a writer.